Question

13．實際上，每個人都能夠用自己的努力去換來成功．
In fact，everyone can make their own efforts to get success．．

Answer 1

分析 In fact，everyone can make their own efforts to get success．

解答 答案：In fact，everyone can make their own efforts to get success．這里是表達(dá)客觀事實用一般現(xiàn)在時，"實際上"in fact，每個人everyone做主語，can+動詞原形表示能…，努力做某事make one's effort to do sth，own自己的，故make their own efforts to，獲取成功get success，故答案是In fact，everyone can make their own efforts to get success．

點評 1．首先根據(jù)語法判斷待譯部分在句中的功能，結(jié)構(gòu)及形式，即在句中充當(dāng)什么成分，用動賓短語，介賓短語還是名詞性短語，是否要用從句，是否要倒裝等 
?2，注意選詞應(yīng)盡量貼切，尤其要注意搭配是否正確，不要混用近義詞和形近詞．
?3，翻譯完成后再次通讀句子，檢查有無拼寫，用詞，語法或邏輯錯誤，檢查句子（整句）是否完整，主謂是否一致，代詞和名詞是否一致，是否遺漏了結(jié)構(gòu)詞，介詞等，并進行必要的修改和潤色．