Question

1．隨著互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的發(fā)展，智能手機(jī)（smart-phone）已被廣泛使用．我們身邊的"低頭族（phubber）"隨處可見．請根據(jù)圖中所示，結(jié)合表格所提供的信息，以"Refuse to be phubbers"為題寫一篇90詞左右的短文．

要求：1．短文須包含所有信息，語句通順、意思連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2．題目與開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
參考詞匯：1．have effects on 對…有影響 2．concentrate on  聚焦于…
3．face-to-face conversation  4．make good use of 
Refuse to be phubbers
With the development of the Internet，smart-phones are widely used among people．Phubbers can be seen here and there．
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Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
Even worse，①when some people cross the street，they still ②concentrate on their mobile phones，③which can easily cause traffic accidents甚至更糟的是，當(dāng)一些人過馬路的時候他們?nèi)匀魂P(guān)注手機(jī)，那樣很容易引起交通事故．
①when引導(dǎo)的是時間狀語從句．
②concentrate on 專注于
③which引導(dǎo)的非限制定語從句，修飾前面的整個句子．
【高分句型二】
In my opinion，we'd better make good use of smart-phones依我看來，我們最好利用好手機(jī)．
had better do sth 最好做某事
make use of使用…

解答 Refuse to be phubbers
With the development of the Internet，smart-phones are widely used among people．Phubbers can be seen here and there．
While eating with family members or getting together with friends，some are always busy playing with their mobile phones．It has bad effects on the relationship with their relatives and friends．Even worse，when some people cross the street，they still concentrate on their mobile phones，which can easily cause traffic accidents．【高分句型一】It's too dangerous．And others stay up playing games．I think it is really bad for their health，work and study．（現(xiàn)象和弊端）
In my opinion，we'd better make good use of smart-phones．【高分句型二】Don't depend on them too much．And I do believe that face-to-face conversations will bring us more pleasure than chatting online．Let's raise our heads and refuse to be phubbers from now on!（觀點）

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