Question

假設(shè)你是一名已經(jīng)移民到美國(guó)的學(xué)生Tim，在電視上，你看到中國(guó)出現(xiàn)了H7N9禽流感(H7N9 bird flu),目前已經(jīng)有87名禽流感患者，你為你在中國(guó)上學(xué)的筆友Mike的健康與安全擔(dān)心。請(qǐng)立即給他寫(xiě)一封e-mail詢(xún)問(wèn)他的情況，并給他提出防護(hù)建議。
要點(diǎn):
詢(xún)問(wèn)
他的健康狀況
他們學(xué)校有無(wú)H7N9
他們是否還在上學(xué)
建議
盡量待在家里，少去人多的地方；
勤洗手，講衛(wèi)生；
多開(kāi)窗，保持空氣新鮮；
多吃水果蔬菜
Dear Mike，
From the TV I know H7N9 bird flu have been discovered in China. 87 people have been confirmed to be infected with the H7N9 bird flu. I am worried about you.
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So far, the disease is not so deadly as it seems to be. Do be at ease! Take care and you will be OK.
Yours,
Tim

Answer 1

From the TV I know H7N9 bird flu have been discovered in China. 87 people have been confirmed to be infected with the H7N9 bird flu. I am worried about you.Are you OK?Are there any H7N9 bird flu cases in your school ?Do you still have to go to school every day?
To stay away from the disease,you’d better stay at home as much as possible and not go to places where there are many people .Wash your hands more of ten to keep them clean .open the window to have more fresh air in the room .and eat more fruit and vegetables to keep yourself fit and strong.
So far, the disease is not so deadly as it seems to be. Do be at ease! Take care and you will be OK.
Yours,
Tim

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)。本文主要應(yīng)用征求建議的語(yǔ)氣。根據(jù)提示的內(nèi)容發(fā)展，按詢(xún)問(wèn)及給出的建議。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，從詢(xún)問(wèn)H7N9的情況再到給筆友提出建議，第二段給筆友提出建議表達(dá)對(duì)筆友的關(guān)心。此處用了you’d better stay at home as much as possible and not go to places where there are many people這些句型給文章增色不少。