Question

某中文網(wǎng)站提出“走路去上學(xué)”的倡議，請(qǐng)你就這一話題寫一篇約80詞的英語(yǔ)短文。
內(nèi)容提示：1. 走路有利于健康且安全；
2. 和同學(xué)結(jié)伴可以相互了解，相互幫助；
3. 不需要父母接送，學(xué)會(huì)自理；
4. 道路上車輛減少，城市不再擁堵；
……
要求：1. 要點(diǎn)齊全，條理清楚，語(yǔ)句通順，語(yǔ)法正確，書寫規(guī)范。
2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)校名及姓名，否則不予評(píng)分。
3. 開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
參考詞匯: be good for, each other, send, no longer, crowded
Walking to school is a wonderful way to exercise.                                         
                                                                                   
                                                                                   
                                                                                   
                                                                                   
                                                                                   
                                                                                   

Answer 1

Walking to school is a wonderful way to exercise. I think it's good for health and it's safe. When we walk with our classmates, we can talk about something interesting and know each other better. Also, we can help each other. What's more, if we walk, our parents don't have to send us to school. We can learn to look after ourselves. As a result, there will be fewer cars in the city. Then the streets are no longer crowded.
I hope more and more students will go to school on foot.

試題分析：這是篇命題作文。題中給出了寫作的要點(diǎn)，寫作時(shí)一定要注意要點(diǎn)的齊全，并可適當(dāng)展開擴(kuò)充；句子之間可加入一些承接性的句子來加強(qiáng)文章的連貫性和邏輯性。
【亮點(diǎn)分析】這篇文章要點(diǎn)齊全，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確流暢。文中用了一些常用的表達(dá)方式，如：When we walk with our classmates, we can talk about something interesting and know each other better.當(dāng)我們和同學(xué)一起走路時(shí)，我們可以談?wù)撘恍┯腥さ氖虑椴⑶腋�好的了解�?duì)方。When引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句。另外，文中用來一些承接性的句子，如Also 同樣；What's more另外；As a result結(jié)果是；Then然后。