Question

【題目】假如你是李華，你們班輸了上周的籃球賽。Henry認(rèn)為是他未能投進(jìn)最后一球所造成的，有的隊(duì)友也因此而責(zé)怪他。請(qǐng)你寫一封英文郵件安慰他，談?wù)勀銓?duì)此事的看法，并就如何取得隊(duì)友的理解提出建議。

要求：

（1）80詞左右（開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；

（2）可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

（3）信中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名和校名。

Dear Henry,

I learned that you are feeling sorry and upset because of losing the basketball game…

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Henry,

I learned that you are feeling sorry and upset because of losing the basketball game. It's not easy being in your situation, and it's normal to have these feelings. Anyway, don't be too hard on yourself.

You know, basketball is about team effort. It's never just one person's fault. What matters is that you should learn from the games as well as your mistakes. Besides, you need to think about how you can do better next time.

As a whole, teammates should support and believe in each other. Why don't you sit down and communicate with them? And you could promise that you will spare no efforts to better your skills. If all of you pull together, you're sure to win the next one.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

這是一篇給材料的書信作文。假如你是李華，就輸球事件安慰Henry，談?wù)勀銓?duì)此事的看法，并就如何取得隊(duì)友的理解提出建議。人稱為第二人稱，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。動(dòng)筆前先要注意認(rèn)真閱讀材料確定寫作內(nèi)容；文章必須包括要點(diǎn)中所給的信息，但不要逐句翻譯，補(bǔ)充兩條個(gè)人的觀點(diǎn)并提出建議。注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮使行文連貫，多種句式交叉使用來(lái)豐富文章的文采。高分句型一：What matters is that you should learn from the games as well as your mistakes. 重要的是你應(yīng)該從比賽中吸取教訓(xùn)，也要從錯(cuò)誤中吸取教訓(xùn)。What matters is that重要的是，that引導(dǎo)的是表語(yǔ)從句。as well as常用來(lái)連接兩個(gè)并列的成分，作“也，還”講。高分句型二：And you could promise that you will spare no efforts to better your skills. 你可以保證你會(huì)不遺余力地提高你的技能。that引導(dǎo)的是賓語(yǔ)從句，spare no efforts to do sth.不遺余力做某事。高分句型三：If all of you pull together, you're sure to win the next one. 如果大家齊心協(xié)力，你們一定會(huì)贏得下一場(chǎng)比賽。此句是if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句；be sure to do sth. 必定做某事。