Question

假如你是Han Mei，下面是一封你的筆友Alice給你發(fā)來的e-mail的內(nèi)容，給她寫一封回信，與她交流看法，并幫她排憂解難。詞數(shù)在80左右。
提示詞： listen to , mother’s love, care about, communicate with, get along with, smile

Dear Han Mei, I’m afraid I’ve got a big problem recently. My mother talks too much to me. She always tells me, “Be careful while crossing the street.” “Put on more clothes.” “Did you do a good job at school?” and so on. I’m annoyed. What shall I do? Alice

Dear Alice,
As a teenager, I met the same problem as you.                                                  
                                                                              

Answer 1

Dear Alice,
As a teenager,I met the same problem as you.But now I can get along better with my mother.Here are some ideas for you.
Your mother talks much,because she cares about you.Maybe it’s not a good way,but it shows your mother’s love.So I think you should listen to her.If your opinions are different your mother’s,you can communicate with her,and tell her what you’re thinking about.
If your mother doesn’t take your advice,just keep silent and give her a smile.
I hope what I say here can help you a lot.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，所給材料是一封來信，故動筆前首先要認(rèn)真閱讀來信，爭取在回信中對來信內(nèi)容都要有所回應(yīng)。結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第二人稱，一般過去及現(xiàn)在時態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述。語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。如:get along with和……相處；careabout關(guān)心；be different from與……不同；talk about談?wù)撃呈�；keep silence保持沉默等。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用, 讓文章更出彩。