Question

“保護(hù)環(huán)境，人人有責(zé)”， 請(qǐng)以How to Be a Greener Person為題，寫(xiě)一篇有關(guān)環(huán)保的短文并適當(dāng)發(fā)表自己的看法，90詞左右，包含以下要點(diǎn):
1 積極參加各種活動(dòng)，宣傳環(huán)保；
2 使用紙張的兩面，收集廢紙、軟飲料罐；
3 使用布袋購(gòu)物，不用塑料袋；
4 節(jié)約水電，及時(shí)關(guān)燈、關(guān)水龍頭；
5 短途旅行盡量步行或騎車(chē)。
How to Be a Greener Person
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Answer 1

How to be a greener person.
Now all the persons in the world are talking about being more environmentally friendly, which calls on us to be a greener person. Being a greener person means that we should try our best to pollute the environment less and be more friendly to the environment, which is easier said than done. To be a greener person, we should use bicycles or public transport services rather than driving your own cars or motorbikes. We should try to recyle what we use and try not to waste them. We can also be greener by saving water and electricity and so on.Being a greener person is being friendly to the earth as well as all the human beings in the world. Try your best and we will make a difference.

試題分析：本題要求寫(xiě)一篇保護(hù)環(huán)境的短文。要求中已經(jīng)給出了主要要點(diǎn)，因此要求我們自由發(fā)揮的地方不多，只是需要注意不能遺留要求中的要點(diǎn)。動(dòng)筆前先要注意認(rèn)真審題，分析體裁，確定時(shí)態(tài)；分析內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞；為豐富文章的文采，可以多用一些復(fù)合句。最后，注意不要犯語(yǔ)法、句法以及搭配性錯(cuò)誤，寫(xiě)好后反復(fù)讀幾遍，適當(dāng)修改。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了大量的從句和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少. 如: talk about談?wù)�；call on號(hào)召；try one’s best to do sth盡力做某事；as well as也，和……一樣以及有which引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句等。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理.