Question

【題目】 Have you got anything that is branded on your memory, making you feel happy, satisfied, proud or just feel sad, terrible, and regretful? Maybe you did it, experienced it, read it, saw it or only heard of it.

Please write a composition with the title “The ________ thing that I have ever ________” to share your story. The following information should be included:

1. How did you get the story?

2. When and where did it happen?

3. What happened exactly?

4. Why is it branded on your memory? Please list at least two reasons.

Answer 1

【答案】請(qǐng)參考范文：

The happy thing that I have ever experienced

This is a story of my own experience, from this thing, I really felt my father's love for me, warm and deep love.

I was born in a poor family,My parents live a simple life.When I was 8 years old, I was in Grade 3 of primary school. I liked watching others play the piano. In fact, I liked the beautiful picture of playing the piano.

Suddenly one day, my father took me to a nice place.Later, I learned that it was a piano training center, learning piano was very expensive, but my father helped me find a piano teacher.So I learned the piano from my teacher there.

Three months later, I played the piano to my father, but I did not play well. The teacher told my father that maybe I had no gift for it.He advised my father to give up.But my father said that if I would like to play the piano, he didn't give up. I was moved by my father's encourgement.

【解析】

本文是關(guān)于自己經(jīng)歷或看到的故事為話題的材料作文，要求根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)來寫作。學(xué)生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀材料中給出的短語(yǔ)及相關(guān)信息,認(rèn)真審題,確定文章的中心。在寫作的文章具有一定的連貫性,還應(yīng)注意使用一些連接詞,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性和條理性。寫作時(shí)還要注意:1.書寫規(guī)范；2.可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié),使內(nèi)容充實(shí),行文連貫；3.寫完后要認(rèn)真檢查是否有漏寫要點(diǎn),有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤等。高分句型：This is a story of my own experience, from this thing, I really felt my father's love for me, warm and deep love.這是一個(gè)關(guān)于我自己經(jīng)歷的故事，從這件事上，我真的感受到了爸爸對(duì)我的愛，溫暖而深沉的愛。Suddenly one day, my father said to take me to a nice place.突然有一天，爸爸說帶我去一個(gè)好地方。But my father said as long as I am happy on the line, it doesn't matter.但是我爸爸說只要我高興就行，沒關(guān)系。