Question

【題目】為配合我市開(kāi)展“創(chuàng)建文明城市(build a civilized city)”活動(dòng)，學(xué)校舉辦以“How to Behave Well”為主題的英語(yǔ)征文比賽活動(dòng)。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿。談?wù)勆�活中你是怎么做的，以及這樣做的意義。

提示詞語(yǔ)：behave well, in public places, obey the rules, keep clean, be polite,

提示問(wèn)題：● What do you do in your daily life?

● Why do you do so?

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Answer 1

【答案】How to Behave Well

In order to build a civilized city,we students should try our best to behave well in the activities.It’s a good habit to keep our clothes clean and tidy.Our city should be kept clean every day.Don’t throw litter or spit everywhere.It’s good manners to say”Thank you” and “Please” and so on.We should never say dirty words.Be friendly to others and always ready to help people in need.For example,when we are on the bus,we should give our seats to the old and the women with babies.We should also obey traffic rules.When the traffic lights are red,we must stop.And we’d better not talk or laugh loudly in public.If everyone behaves well,our city will be more beautiful and more attractive.

【解析】

這篇作文要求為配合我市開(kāi)展“創(chuàng)建文明城市(build a civilized city)”活動(dòng)，學(xué)校舉辦以“How to Behave Well”為主題的英語(yǔ)征文比賽活動(dòng)。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿。談?wù)勆�活中你是怎么做的，以及這樣做的意義。首先應(yīng)注意在短文中要包括題目中給出的所有信息，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，并注意表達(dá)的層次和條理。其次要注意使用正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱(chēng)，通過(guò)分析可知，這篇短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用原形。最后要注意英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣，英語(yǔ)句式與漢語(yǔ)在語(yǔ)序和詞性上的使用是不同的，要注意不能逐詞翻譯，寫(xiě)漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)。應(yīng)從句子整體考慮，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和句型來(lái)表達(dá)，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范。還應(yīng)使用一些較好的句型或者短語(yǔ)，增強(qiáng)文章的表現(xiàn)力。