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【題目】書面表達(dá)。朋友是人生中的一大財富，請你根據(jù)以下的寫作要點寫一篇短文，介紹你最好的朋友Sally，同時分享一下你們維護(hù)彼此間友誼的心得。詞數(shù)80個左右，短文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)內(nèi)。
寫作要點：Sally：
1).外貌：一雙大眼睛，長長的頭發(fā)，和我一樣高。
2).性格： 待人友好，臉上經(jīng)常帶著微笑。
3).興趣愛好：喜歡唱歌跳舞（和我一樣）
維護(hù)友誼的心得：1).每天一起騎自行車上學(xué)，周末一起到圖書館看書。
2).下課后經(jīng)常一起聊天，分享快樂和煩惱。 3).彼此誠實。
Sally is my best friends. We met at a party 10 years ago.

Answer 1

【答案】Sally is my best friends. I like her very much.
We met at a party 10 years ago. She has big eyes with long golden hair. She is as tall as me. She is friendly to others. There is always a smile on her face. She enjoys singing and dancing like me. Why do we become good friends? Let me tell you. First we ride bikes to school together every day. Then we often go to the library on weekends. What's more， we often chat with each other to share the joy and worries after class . We are honest to each other.
I'm lucky to have such a good friend.

【解析】根據(jù)題目提示，我們應(yīng)該確定本文的時態(tài)應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱應(yīng)該用第三人稱；書寫內(nèi)容包括， 1).外貌：一雙大眼睛，長長的頭發(fā)，和我一樣高。2).性格： 待人友好，臉上經(jīng)常帶著微笑。 3).興趣愛好：喜歡唱歌跳舞（和我一樣）。維護(hù)友誼的心得：1).每天一起騎自行車上學(xué)，周末一起到圖書館看書。 2).下課后經(jīng)常一起聊天，分享快樂和煩惱。 3).彼此誠實。注意描述的順序；注意時態(tài)，人稱和固定詞組搭配，注意句子的順暢，應(yīng)符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。