Question

【題目】書面表達

假定你叫劉丹，請你根據(jù)所給提示用英文給你的加拿大筆友Lucy寫一封電子郵件，談?wù)勀愫秃糜焉现苋赵诔鞘泄珗@的一次游玩活動及感受。

提示：

1. 爬山、拍照；

2. 劃船、野餐；

3. 娛樂（至少提及兩項活動）。

要求：

1. 緊扣主題及提示，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫；

2. 詞數(shù)80左右。郵件格式已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Hi, Lucy,

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Best,

Liu Dan

Answer 1

【答案】Hi, Lucy,

How are you? I am having a great time here in Ningxia. Last Sunday my friends and I went to play in the City Park. When we got there, we first climbed a hill and took some photos. Then we went boating on the lake. At noon, we had a picnic under a big tree. We enjoyed different kinds of delicious food. After that, we sang songs and played cards. We went back at about three in the afternoon. We had a wonderful time. How about you? Write to me soon!

Best,

Liu Dan

【解析】

這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如have a great time，last Sunday，in the City Park，take some photos，go boating，on the lake，have a picnic，go back，different kinds of等。而固定句型How about you?和時間狀語從句When we got there, we first climbed a hill and took some photos.的運用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，是本文的亮點。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。