Question

【題目】假如李明是你的好朋友，根據(jù)提示寫(xiě)一篇80詞左右的短文介紹李明的業(yè)余愛(ài)好。（短文開(kāi)頭已給出）

提示語(yǔ)：

1. 李明以前是個(gè)電影迷，一周至少去看兩次電影，有時(shí)租VCD在家里看，最喜歡的影星是姜文；

2. 李明現(xiàn)在的興趣是集郵，認(rèn)為集郵非常有趣，可以從郵票上學(xué)到很多關(guān)于人物、地點(diǎn)、歷史的知識(shí)，有些舊郵票非常有價(jià)值；

3. 上周五是李明的生日，他從朋友那里得到了許多郵票，非常高興。

Li Ming is my good friend. He has many hobbies. He used to

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Answer 1

【答案】

Li Ming is my good friend. He has many hobbies. He used to be a movie fan. He went to the movie theater at least twice a week. Sometimes he rented VCDs and watched them at home. His favorite movie star was Jiang Wen.

Now Lin Ming is interested in collecting stamps. He thinks it's great fun. He can learn a lot about people, places, history and many other things from stamps. Some old stamps are very valuable.

Last Friday was Li Ming's birthday. He got many stamps from his friends. Li Ming was very happy.

【解析】

考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)。運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)亩陶Z(yǔ)表達(dá)中心思想，增加作文的可讀性。完成提示詞時(shí)也要符合事實(shí)。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。
本篇作文明顯分成三段，而且三段時(shí)態(tài)有區(qū)別。第一段講述李明以前的愛(ài)好，故用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，在第一段中使用了used to do表示過(guò)去常常做某事，而現(xiàn)在不做。第二段描述李明現(xiàn)在的愛(ài)好，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。第三段描述上周五李明過(guò)生日的情況，用一般過(guò)去時(shí)。