Question

Imagine you are on vacation,Talk about what did you do on vacation.
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Answer 1

I love travelling very much. On the summer vacation , I usually go outdoors and have fun.This summer vacation I want to do something different . I am interested in Chinese history. So I flew to Beijing and Xi’an for the summer vacation. During theday,I visited places of interest and went shopping. At night, I took walks to enjoy the night views. I am enjoying my holiday and having a great time.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。本文作者先寫(xiě)他的愛(ài)好是什么，之后寫(xiě)通常假期做什么，最后寫(xiě)他此次假期做了什么。 本文主要用一般過(guò)去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)進(jìn)行敘述。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，例如 go outdoors ，have fun ， do something different， interested in， places of interest ， went shopping ，took walks等短語(yǔ)，以及 用During theday,I visited places of interest and went shopping. At night, I took walks to enjoy the night views.兩句進(jìn)行對(duì)比。文章層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿(mǎn)，表達(dá)流暢。