Question

最近網(wǎng)民熱議“中國式過馬路”現(xiàn)象，寧波市開展了以“文明出行，從不闖紅燈做起”為主題的交通安全宣傳月活動。請你根據(jù)下圖提示，用英文寫一篇短文，談?wù)勛鳛閷幉ㄊ忻駪?yīng)該如何文明出行。
注意：
1.文中應(yīng)包含所有要點，并可適當發(fā)揮。
2.詞數(shù)：80詞左右。開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

As we all know, traffic safety plays an important part in our daily life. But what can we do to keep safe? Here are some suggestions.
As walkers,                                                                  
                                                                               
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                               
If everyone does so, people are sure to enjoy their life better.

Answer 1

As we all know, traffic safety plays an important part in our daily life. But what can we do to keep safe? Here are some suggestions.
As walkers, you should walk at the side of the road. Always remember to walk on the zebra crossing and look left and right carefully before you cross the road. Never try to jump the red light. It’s dangerous. If you drive, you should slow down at the traffic lights. You must always wear a seat belt. Never drive cars after drinking and you shouldn’t use your mobile phones while driving. It may cause serious traffic accidents. While you are waiting for a bus, please stand in line and wait for your turn. Don’t push others. What’s more, give your seat to the people who need it most.
If everyone does so, I think people are sure to enjoy their life better.

試題分析：這篇作文要求我們通過觀察這幅圖來描述一下，在過馬路的時候，我們應(yīng)該注意哪些事情，怎樣文明過馬路。配合圖畫，還有一些提綱的東西和一些關(guān)鍵詞，來幫助我們組織文章。通過審題，我們主要從三個方面來闡述，行人、司機和乘客。同學們要發(fā)揮自己的想象力，并結(jié)合我們?nèi)粘Ｉ�活中的熟悉的一些交通�?guī)則來充實文章的內(nèi)容。本文應(yīng)主要使用第三人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時。寫作時還要注意行文連貫。
【亮點說明】這篇范文全面的描述了圖畫中的內(nèi)容，并利用題目中所給的提綱從行人、司機和乘客三個方面進行了闡述，要點全面，內(nèi)容充實。文章中使用了一些較好的句式和短語，如Always remember to walk on the zebra crossing and look left and right carefully before you cross the road.、If you drive, you should slow down at the traffic lights、Never drive cars after drinking and you shouldn’t use your mobile phones while driving、While you are waiting for a bus, please stand in line and wait for your turn.等。并且文章中一些情態(tài)動詞和祈使句的使用為文章增加了力量。