【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)(5分)

我們每個(gè)人都有自己的夢(mèng)想家園。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示,向大家介紹一下你夢(mèng)想中的家園。字?jǐn)?shù)70左右。要點(diǎn)如下:

1. 我的夢(mèng)想家園在一個(gè)森林附近,這里空氣新鮮。

2. 屋后有一個(gè)湖,周末我可以和朋友一起在湖里劃船。

3. 我最喜歡書(shū)房,干凈、舒適;

4. 鄰居們都有一技之長(zhǎng),我們常;ハ鄮椭

5. 從這里乘地鐵去市中心只要一小時(shí)。

6. 我認(rèn)為……(發(fā)揮1-2句)

My Dream Home

【答案】

One possible version

My Dream Home

My dream home is near a forest. The air is fresh. There is a lake behind the house. At the weekend my friends and I row a boat on it. My favorite room is the study, it is clean and comfortable. My neighbors have different skills. We often help each other. It takes only an hour to the center of the city by underground. I think my dream home is beautiful.

【解析】

試題分析:這是一篇給材料作文,介紹我夢(mèng)想的家園。結(jié)合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài),人稱(chēng)為單數(shù)第一,三人稱(chēng),注意主謂一致問(wèn)題,句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu),注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用,比如:My dream home is…, There is…, It is…, It takes sometime to do sth.以及I think…等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞,注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系。注意最后要表達(dá)自己對(duì)夢(mèng)想家園的喜愛(ài)和稱(chēng)贊之情。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了我夢(mèng)想的家園的位置和空氣,接下來(lái)介紹夢(mèng)想家園的生活,最后表達(dá)喜歡夢(mèng)想家園。此處at the weekend, row a boat, help each other, by underground等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。

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