Question

你的好友Gina邀請(qǐng)你(Amy)到她家過(guò)周末，你很想見(jiàn)她，可事情太多不能去。請(qǐng)發(fā)e-mail把情況告訴她（至少三個(gè)理由），并邀請(qǐng)她到你家來(lái)。約70詞。
____________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

Dear Gina,
Thank you for inviting me to you home to spend weekends with you.And I want to meet you,but I have too many things to do.On Saturday morning,I have to wash my clothes,make my bed and clean my room.On Saturday afternoon,I must go shopping with my mother and help her cook dinner,because my aunt is coming for dinner.On Sunday morning,I have to do my homework.And I have to go to the movies with my cousin on Sunday afternoon.
Can you come to my home next weekend?We can do homework and go shopping together.
Yours,
Amy

試題分析：這是一篇話(huà)題作文。本文要求比較明確，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些要求表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀要求，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料要求可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語(yǔ)是第一人稱(chēng)，注意時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。如：Thank you for inviting me，I want to meet you，too many things to do，On Saturday morning，go shopping with my mother， help her cook dinner，my aunt is coming for dinner，go to the movies with my cousin，Can you come to my home next weekend?等，學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性、更富有條理。