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2．經(jīng)過努力，你終于在中考時(shí)金榜題名．在高中第一次放月假時(shí)，你帶著一顆感恩的心回訪母校，給你的學(xué)弟學(xué)妹作報(bào)告，你想對(duì)他們說些什么呢？師恩難忘、同學(xué)情誼、還有太多太多讓你無法忘記的人和事…（詞數(shù)：80～100）
要點(diǎn)可包括如下：
回顧：美麗的校園、慈祥的老師、生動(dòng)有趣的課堂、豐富多彩的校園活動(dòng)，
得到的關(guān)愛、取得的進(jìn)步；
感謝：老師的教導(dǎo)，父母的支持，同學(xué)的幫助；
祝愿：但愿…
注意：
必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語句通順、句意連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，80詞左右，發(fā)言稿的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)．
Good afternoon，everyone!I'm very glad to have the chance to make a speech here，
It is a great honor for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of 2009．
It has been three great years for us to study in this beautiful school．Our teachers always try to make their lessons lively and interesting．We have learned a lot over these yeas，but we could hardly succeed without our teacher's efforts，our parents'support and our classmate's help．At this moment，I would like to thank all of you．
I wish our school more beautiful and all of us have a wonderful future!
Goodbye，our beautiful school，our dear teachers and our friends．
Thank you for listening．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
  It is a great honor for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of 2009．我很榮幸代表2009屆畢業(yè)生演講．這是it is+形容詞或名詞+for sb．to do  sth．句型，對(duì)于…來說…是…的．
高分句型二
 I wish our school will be more beautiful and all of us will have a wonderful future!希望我們的學(xué)校更美麗，我們所有人都有一個(gè)美好的未來！這是一個(gè)賓語從句，I wish是主句，后面的是賓語從句，注意時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)該用一般將來時(shí)．

解答 Good afternoon，ladies and gentlemen，my dear teachers and fellow graduates，
It is a great honor for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of 2009．【高分句型一，注意it is+形容詞或名詞+for sb．to do sth．句型的使用】
It has been three great years for us to study in this beautiful school．Our teachers always try to make their lessons lively and interesting．We have learned a lot over these yeas，but we could hardly succeed without our teachers'efforts，our parents'support and our classmates'help【要點(diǎn)一，回顧】At this moment，I would like to thank all of you for what you have done for us．【要點(diǎn)二，感謝】I wish our school more beautiful and all of us have a wonderful future!【高分句型二，注意賓語從句的使用】【要點(diǎn)三，祝愿】
Goodbye，our beautiful school，our dear teachers and our friends．Thank you for listening．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點(diǎn)，不可遺漏．需在平時(shí)積累相關(guān)的詞匯，多閱讀此類題材，將詞匯歸類整理；動(dòng)筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡單提綱，寫出關(guān)鍵單詞．寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系．上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．