Question

假設(shè)你叫李明，收到美國(guó)中學(xué)生Emily的郵件，請(qǐng)給她回復(fù)并談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?br />

Dear Li Ming, It’s a long time since we last met. I have joined a club called “Green Earth”. I plan to make a speech about saving，for some people often waste things, like water, food and energy. You always have great ideas. Could you please choose one from the three and tell me what people should do in everyday life? I am looking forward to your reply. Yours, Emily

 

Dear Emily, Thank you for your letter._____________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Ming

 

Answer 1

One possible version:
Dear Emily,
Thank you for your letter. I’m glad to share my ideas with you. What you are doing in the “Green Earth” club is meaningful.
I am also strongly against any kind of wasting. With such a large population in China, food is especially precious. People should be encouraged to eat at home. In this way, the leftovers can be the next day’s meal and much less food would be wasted. If people do have to eat outside and there is food left, they should take it home and eat it later.
I believe it’s our duty to protect our earth. Actually it is not that difficult. A little more attention from everyone in daily life will be of great help.
Yours,
Li Ming

試題分析: 這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作，寫一封回信。本題材料主要是一封來(lái)信，故動(dòng)筆前一定要認(rèn)真閱讀來(lái)信。在回信中對(duì)涉及的問(wèn)題都要有所回應(yīng)。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。寫作中注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：注意寫作中的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱和數(shù)的問(wèn)題，時(shí)態(tài)一般是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱是第一人稱較多。寫作中語(yǔ)言要準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)明，說(shuō)明有條理，符合邏輯。