Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)

近期，關(guān)于師生沖突的新聞?lì)l現(xiàn)媒體。針對(duì)這一現(xiàn)象，某英文報(bào)社就“如何處理師生之間的矛盾”發(fā)起了一個(gè)專(zhuān)題征文活動(dòng)。假設(shè)你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表中的內(nèi)容提示，結(jié)合你自己的觀點(diǎn)，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇小短文，發(fā)表在學(xué)校“英語(yǔ)角”上。

原因	解決辦法
1. 師生之間缺少交流與溝通； 2. 教師對(duì)學(xué)生要求過(guò)分嚴(yán)格； 3. 不良的家庭教育； ……	1. 加強(qiáng)交流與溝通，消除誤解； 2. 建立平等友好的師生關(guān)系； 3. 加強(qiáng)家校溝通； ……

注意:

1.文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；

2.語(yǔ)言通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；

3.詞數(shù): 80左右，信件的開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯: conflict n. 沖突 media n. 媒體 misunderstanding n. 誤解

be lack of 缺少 build up 建立 family education 家庭教育

Recently, news about the conflicts between teachers and students frequently appear on the media. Why are the relationship between teachers and students becoming so serious?

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Answer 1

【答案】Recently, news about the conflicts between teachers and students frequently appear on the media. Why are the relationship between teachers and students becoming so serious?

Different people have different ideas about it. In my opinion, teachers and students are lack of good communication. Some teachers only pay attention to the students’ grades. Some teachers are too strict with the students. They ask the students to do this, not to do that, so students have too much pressure. Some students don’t have good family education. They gradually become rude and impolite.

To solve this problem, teachers and students need to chat often and avoid misunderstanding. Teachers should care more about students’ feelings and help them solve the problems in life. Little by little, they can build up an equal and friendly relationship. Besides, schools should often communicate with parents and ask parents to take part in school activities or talk about school events. Then they can know their children and the schools well.

All in all, understanding is a good way to solve the problems.

【解析】試題分析：這是一篇材料作文，以“師生沖突”為話題，結(jié)合所給材料，要把“師生沖突”的原因與解決方法有條理地表達(dá)出來(lái)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，注意把握時(shí)態(tài)與人稱(chēng)。還要注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意文后要表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)和想法。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)篇描述了“師生沖突”這種現(xiàn)象的存在，接下來(lái)介紹了“師生沖突”的原因與解決方法，最后作者對(duì)于“師生沖突”，發(fā)表了自己的觀點(diǎn)和看法。本文使用了豐富的詞匯，比如：in my opinion，be lack of， pay attention to，too much pressure，little by little, and, besides，all in all等交替運(yùn)用，使文章增色不少，這是一篇不錯(cuò)的范文。