Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)（本題有1小題；共計(jì)15分）

友情在我們的生活中非常重要，每個(gè)人都有各自的朋友。那么朋友間應(yīng)該相同還是不一樣呢？下面是我和我的朋友Mary間的一些信息，請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格進(jìn)行比較，并發(fā)表對(duì)朋友間異同的看法。

注意：文章必須包含表格內(nèi)所有信息，可進(jìn)行適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

詞數(shù)80詞左右，文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

	I	Mary
Appearance	1.60cm, long straight hair	1.65cm, long curly hair
Personality	shy, friendly	outgoing ,friendly
Hobby	read books, interesting, everyday surf the Internet, relax, sometimes	read books , learn a lot, everyday traveling , open my eyes, once a year

Friendship is very important in our everyday life . Everyone has their own friends, just like Mary and I .We are good friends._________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

Friendship is very important in our everyday life . Everyone has their own friends, just like Mary and I .We are good friends. We have something different. He is taller and stronger than me.I long straight hair, but Mary has long curly hair. I’m shy but she is outing. We are both friendly. we have some same hobbies.We both like reading. I think it’s interesting,she thinks she can learn a lot from the book.

I alaways like to surf the Internet. It makes me relax. But she likes travelling ,she thinks it can open her eyes.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文不使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實(shí)。如she thinks it can open her eyes.等，I think等使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。