Question

【題目】書面表達

假如你是張曉華，下面是你的筆友李軍給你寫的一封電子郵件。請給他寫封回信，幫助他解決一下問題。

要求：

1. 注意書信的格式。

2. 針對問題提出合理的建議。

3. 80詞左右。

Dear Xiaohua,

I’m very interested in English. I think English is very useful and important to us. But I find it not easy for me to memorize words. We have many chances to speak English, but I’m very shy. So when it’s my turn to speak, I often feel very nervous. And I’m afraid of making mistakes. I work very hard, but I still can’t improve my English.

What should I do now? Please give me some good advice. Thank you very much for helping me.

Yours,

Li Jun

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Li Jun,

I’m glad to help you. I think you should memorize words by using them. You can make complete sentences with the words. And you should get much spoken English practice. It’s a good way to join an English language club. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. And get more chances of answering questions in class. Try to get over the problem of shyness.

You are hard-working, and I believe you can improve your English.

Good luck!

Yours,

Zhang Xiaohua

【解析】

本文要求以電子郵件的形式給你的筆友寫一封回信，幫助他解決他所遇到的困難。首先，要仔細閱讀所給材料，明確筆友李軍所遇到的問題。即：（1）記憶單詞困難；（2） 由于害羞，發(fā)言緊張；（3）害怕犯錯誤；（4）雖然努力，但是進步不明顯。其次，注意書信的書寫格式，針對李軍所遇到的問題逐一給出建議，要注意表達準確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。本文應(yīng)用第一人陳，時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。再次，注意使用本單元所學(xué)習(xí)的“by+doing”作方式狀語的用法，例句如：I memorize new words by making word cards. 等；還可以使用某些亮點句型為作文增色，如：It’s a good way to join an English club. 等。

最后，寫出祝福語及落款，再檢查單詞是否有拼寫錯誤，標點符號是否有使用錯誤。