Question

10．假如你是李華，你的英國筆友David發(fā)郵件向你咨詢?nèi)绾螌W好漢語．請根據(jù)提示和要求用英語給David回復郵件．

要求：1．除上圖所給提示外，再寫出兩條如何學好漢語的建議；
2．文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名；
3．字數(shù)90詞左右．郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear David，
    I'm glad to receive your email．Here's some advice on how to learn Chinese well．
It's a good idea to watch movies．You'll find it helpful to improve your listening skills．Reading always plays a key role in language learning，so do more reading in your spare time．
In my opinion，you'd bettermake more Chinese friends．They'll be glad to lend you a hand and it provides a good chance for you to learn about Chinese culture．It's a wise choice to use your cell phone，which allows you to use apps，QQ or WeChat to learn Chinese．
Practice makes perfect，so do remember to keep practicing every day!
Follow the advice，and I'm sure you can learn Chinese well!
Best wishes．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 ①It's a good idea to watch movies．看電影是個好主意．句子中It's a good idea to dosth做某事是個好主意，it作形式主語，to引導的不定式作真正的主語．
②In my opinion，you'd better make more Chinese friends．在我看來，你最好結(jié)交更多的中國朋友．句子中In my opinion表示在我看來；had better最好，后面跟動詞原形．

解答 Dear David，
I'm glad to receive your email．Here's some advice on how to learn Chinese well．（引出話題）
It's a good idea to watch movies（高分句型）．You'll find it helpful to improve your listening skills．（通過看電影學習中文）Reading always plays a key role in language learning，so do more reading in your spare time．（通過大量閱讀學習中文）
In my opinion，you'd better make more Chinese friends（高分句型）．They'll be glad to lend you a hand and it provides a good chance for you to learn about Chinese culture．It's a wise choice to use your cell phone，which allows you to use apps，QQ or WeChat to learn Chinese．（我對學習中文的看法）
Practice makes perfect，so do remember to keep practicing every day!（熟能生巧）
Follow the advice，and I'm sure you can learn Chinese well!（結(jié)束語）
Best wishes．
Yours，
Li Hua

點評 結(jié)合命題作文的特點，首先要審好題，嚴格按照要求去組織文章，并抓住重點．要注意語句通順、意思連貫．在闡述理想的原因的時候要恰當使用表示順序的詞，使這一部分很有條理．要善于運用好的句型如主語從句、動詞不定式和倒裝的使用等為文章增色，表達更流暢．要習慣用英語式的思維去組織句子，避免漢語式的英語．