Question

12．Mary在學(xué)校參加了一個(gè)Buddy Club，從那以后，她改變了很多．請(qǐng)你結(jié)合下面所給的提示，寫一篇英語短文．

	In the past	Now
Personalities	shy，quiet，get nervous easily	brave，outgoing…
Hobbies	reading	reading，singing…
Abilities		good at dancing，singing…

要求：
（1）覆蓋要點(diǎn)，可以合理增加細(xì)節(jié)；
（2）80詞左右，開頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Joining a club sometimes changes a person greatly．
Mary used to be a shy and quiet girl．She used to get nervous easily．Her face often turned red when she spoke with strangers．【高分句型一】She liked nothing but reading alone in her free time．However，she has changed a lot since she joined the Buddy Club．Now，Mary is so brave and outgoing that she isn't afraid of speaking out in public anymore．【高分句型二】What's more，she has lots of hobbies，such as singing，writing and dancing．She is good at them as well．（Mary的變化）
People should change all the time，right？What we should do is to learn from Mary．Change ourselves and choose to be the best of ourselves．（我的感想）．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Her face often turned red when she spoke with strangers．
句中"when she spoke with strangers"為時(shí)間狀語從句，這句話意為：當(dāng)她跟陌生人說話時(shí)，她的臉經(jīng)常變紅．
高分句型二：
Now Mary is so brave and outgoing that she isn't afraid of speaking out in public anymore．
句中使用了"so…that…如此…以致于…"結(jié)構(gòu)，其中that后跟的是結(jié)果狀語從句，句中短語有"be afraid of doing sth 害怕做某事"．這句話意為：現(xiàn)在Mary很勇敢、外向，她不再害怕在公共場(chǎng)合大聲說話．

解答 Joining a club sometimes changes a person greatly．（點(diǎn)明主旨）
Mary used to be a shy and quiet girl．She used to get nervous easily．Her face often turned red when she spoke with strangers．【高分句型一】She liked nothing but reading alone in her free time．However，she has changed a lot since she joined the Buddy Club．Now Mary is so brave and outgoing that she isn't afraid of speaking out in public anymore．【高分句型二】What's more，she has lots of hobbies，such as singing，writing and dancing．She is good at them as well．（Mary的變化）
People should change all the time，right？What we should do is to learn from Mary．Change ourselves and choose to be the best of ourselves．（我的感想）

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