Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

安全對(duì)于每個(gè)人都很重要。中學(xué)生年齡較小，他們的安全問題更是人們關(guān)注的焦點(diǎn)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇關(guān)于中學(xué)生安全的作文。

內(nèi)容提示：

1. 交通安全：遵守交通規(guī)則，不闖紅燈……

2. 食品安全：吃健康食物，不吃垃圾食品……

3. 活動(dòng)安全：進(jìn)行體育鍛煉時(shí)，不要弄傷自己；不獨(dú)自下河游泳……

要求：1. 詞數(shù)：80詞左右；

2. 文章應(yīng)包含所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

參考詞匯：focus 焦點(diǎn)　obey遵守　traffic rules交通規(guī)則

Answer 1

【答案】Safety is very important to everyone. We middle school students are flowers of our country, and our safety is people's focus. There are some safety tips to keep ourselves safe.

First, we must obey traffic rules when we go out. Don't cross the street when the traffic lights are red. Keep to the right in the street.

Second, we should eat healthy food. Don't eat junk food. Eat more fruit and vegetables.

Besides, don't hurt ourselves while we are playing. It's dangerous to swim in the river alone. So we'd better not go to the river without permission.

In a word, it's important for us to remember these safety tips.

【解析】

這是一篇安全的文章。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。