Question

【題目】 天行健，君子以自強不息。勇敢地面對和克服挫折，才會獲得最終的成功。

初中三年，你一定遇到過很多困難，某英文報社以“自強”為話題展開征文活動，請你用英文寫篇短文給報社投稿，談談你曾經(jīng)遇到過的困難，你是如何堅強克服困難的，以及克服困難后你的感受。

提示詞語： remember, write, read, proud

提示問題： ● What difficulty did you have?

● What did you do to overcome the difficulty?

● How did you feel?

Everybody meets difficulties in their life.

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Answer 1

【答案】One possible version:

Everybody meets difficulties in their life. I have met different kinds of difficulties in the past three years. In the first year of middle school, I had big troubles remembering English words. I failed my test and I was really upset.

I decided to face my problem and find out ways to deal with it. First, I went to my English teacher for help. Then, I asked some classmates how they learned new words. They gave me some suggestions. I wrote the words on cards so I could see them any time and read them every day. Step by step, I made great progress.

The experience made me more confident in English. I was so proud of myself.

【解析】

提干閱讀提干，這是一篇議論型文章。議論的是自己曾經(jīng)遇到的困難，又是如何堅強克服困難的，及克服困難后的感受。這是對于初三學生的，一般困難都是在于學習上的，可以側(cè)重考慮學習方面的，一般這類文章以一般過去時為主。

例文這是一篇優(yōu)秀的文章，很好的完成了試題所給出的任務，文章的描述也符合英語語言語境。文章分為三部分，第一部分是提出遇到的困難是很難記住英語單詞，第二部分是去解決這個問題，向老師尋求幫助，向同學請教方法，第三部分對于好方法的實施。文章中也有一些亮點詞句，增強了前后文的邏輯關(guān)系，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。

亮點詞句：

短語：in the past three years在過去三年里；big trouble大麻煩；fail my test考試不及格；decide to do sth決定做某事；write the words寫單詞；

句型：（1）I decided to face my problem and find out ways to deal with it.我決定面對我的問題，并找出處理它的方法。decide to do sth決定做某事；deal with處理；（2）Step by step, I made great progress.一步一步，我取得了很大的進步。step by step一步一步。