Question

以“Where is your time going?”為題，寫一篇100詞左右的短文

In the past	沉迷于無(wú)聊冗長(zhǎng)的電視連續(xù)劇、沒(méi)完沒(méi)了的作業(yè)(再列舉一例)。
At present	閱讀、旅行、鍛煉并陳述理由(再列舉一例)。
In the future	家庭、工作、環(huán)境、慈善并陳述理由。

要求：
1．所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表格中所有的信息，并作適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。
2．語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，中心突出。
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Answer 1

Where is your time going?
How time flies! We are always wondering where time is going. In the past, I was addicted in watching TV series and spent a lot of time on it. It usually took me half a month to finish one TV play and continued with another. Of course, I had to finish my endless homework. Sometimes I would play computer games. It was a good way to kill time.
Now, I usually do some reading and exercise. When I am free, I go traveling to see the natural beauties of the world. I also learn to do something new, for example, cooing. Because I want enjoy the satisfaction of eating my own meals.
In the future, I will spend more time on my family and job. I need to look after them well and do my work well. If I have the ability, I will do something for the charity. For example, help homeless children. I can do my part to make the world a better place to live in.

試題分析：這篇短文要求我們以Where is your time going?為題寫一篇作文，即你的時(shí)間都去哪了。在題目中給了我們這篇短文的寫作提綱，主要包括三部分的內(nèi)容。一是過(guò)去都把時(shí)間花費(fèi)在哪些地方了，如沉迷于電視劇、做沒(méi)玩沒(méi)了的作業(yè)，另外還需自己再補(bǔ)充一條；二是現(xiàn)在把時(shí)間都花費(fèi)在哪兒了，如閱讀、鍛煉和旅行。同樣自己再列舉一個(gè)例子；最后是想象未來(lái)會(huì)把時(shí)間花費(fèi)在什么地方，如家庭、工作、慈善事業(yè)等。提綱雖然已經(jīng)列好，但是很多內(nèi)容都需要我們自己去充實(shí)，讓它變得完整、合理，內(nèi)容豐富，這就需要花費(fèi)我們的想象力，以及我們平時(shí)積累的知識(shí)。另外，寫作時(shí)，還需注意語(yǔ)句間的銜接，使文意連貫，表達(dá)流暢。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這是一篇比較不錯(cuò)的作文。作者從過(guò)去、現(xiàn)在和將來(lái)三個(gè)方面，分成三段，講述了自己的時(shí)間都花費(fèi)在哪了，層次非常的清晰。短文中需要作者自己補(bǔ)充的內(nèi)容完成得也不錯(cuò)。如Sometimes I would play computer games. It was a good way to kill time；I also learn to do something new, for example, cooing. Because I want enjoy the satisfaction of eating my own meals等。這些內(nèi)容都比較貼合文章的需要，意思也很連貫。文章中還用了一些比較好的句型，如In the past, I was addicted in watching TV series and spent a lot of time on it、When I am free, I go traveling to see the natural beauties of the world、I can do my part to make the world a better place to live in等。