Question

【題目】書面表達

假如你是李華，你們學校正在對本校學生英語學習的情況進行調(diào)查，并征求同學們對英語教學的建議。請按下表提示，用英語寫一篇短文，談談你的英語學習情況以及你對老師教學的建議。

項目	內(nèi)容
你對英語的認識	1. 英語是世界上使用最廣泛的語言； 2. 英語有助于了解世界上不同的文化； ……
你目前的英語水平	1. 能用英語與同學進行簡單的交流； 2. 喜歡演講，去年在校演講比賽中獲獎； ……
你英語學習中存在的問題	1. 不能正確地運用語法規(guī)則； 2. 寫作中有時不能清楚地表達自己； ……
你對英語教學的建議	…… (考試自己發(fā)揮，至少一點)

要求：

1. 詞數(shù)100左右。開頭及結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

2. 所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表格中所提供的信息，并可作適當?shù)陌l(fā)揮。

3. 不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名、地名等相關信息。

I am Li Hua.

I wish our school will consider my advice.

Answer 1

【答案】I am Li Hua. Here are some of my thoughts about English. I think English is the most widely used language in the world. English helps us understand different cultures in the world. English can also help us improve our communication skills. And speaking more English can improve our confidence.

At present, I can make simple communications with my classmates in English. I also like making speeches. I won the prize in the school speech contest last year. And I believe that I should be able to speak English fluently when I go to a Western country.

However, I have some problems in learning English. I can’t use the grammar rules correctly. Sometimes I can’t express myself clearly in writing. I often find it hard to remember more difficult words.

At last, I have some suggestions for English teaching as well. I think teachers should communicate with us in English when they are in class.

I wish our school will consider my advice.

【解析】

試題這是一篇話題作文，結(jié)合所給內(nèi)容，把各要點有條理的表達出來。注意一些常見句式的應用，注意把握時態(tài)與人稱。還要注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系，注意文后要表達自己的觀點和想法。

寫作亮點：本文結(jié)構緊湊，語言簡練。文中help sb. do sth，at present, make simple communications with, be able to, in class, However, and, at last等詞(組)的恰當使用，使上下文意連接緊密；文中還使用倒裝句、賓語從句、并列句、時間狀語從句等豐富的句型，大大增加了信息的容量，情態(tài)動詞運用精準，使文章增色不少，值得學習。