Question

【題目】Linda暑假過得很開心。假如你是Linda，請根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇70詞左右的短文講述一下是如何度過暑假的。

要點提示：

1. 去海南旅游，沙灘上玩；

2. 做自己喜歡的事情，比如：逛書店買書；

3. 和朋友踢足球，進行體育鍛煉；

4. 每天早上讀英語，上午安排兩個小時做作業(yè)。

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Answer 1

【答案】I enjoyed my summer vacation. I traveled to Hainan with my parents and we had fun on the beach. During the vacation I often went to my favorite bookstore and bought many interesting books. Sometimes I played soccer with my friends in the afternoon. Playing sport could keep us healthy. I also spent some time in studying. Every morning I read English, and from 9:00 a.m. to 11:00 a.m. I did my homework.

【解析】本篇作文屬于材料作文，主要表達如何度過暑假。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。

【亮點說明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運用了時態(tài)語態(tài)和主謂一致，特別是一些亮點詞句，如enjoy, have fun, playing sports could keep us healthy, also等，增加了邏輯關(guān)系，增強了上下文的意思連貫性，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順。