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【題目】當(dāng)今社會(huì)，無論在大街小巷.餐館，還是聚會(huì)場(chǎng)所，你都能看見一些人正低著頭玩手機(jī)。網(wǎng)絡(luò)上給他們?nèi)×艘粋�(gè)有趣的名字叫“低頭族”。作為中學(xué)生，對(duì)此現(xiàn)象，你有什么看法？請(qǐng)寫一篇80--100詞的文章。
寫作要求：1）書寫工整，語句通順；
2）文章中請(qǐng)勿使用真實(shí)姓名或地名；
3）自擬作文標(biāo)題。

Answer 1

【答案】One possible version：
How to use mobile phones properly

With the development of society and science, mobile phones are widely used in our daily life. We can see a number of mobile phone fans almost everywhere. As a middle school student, how should we use mobile phones properly?

We shouldn't spend too much time playing with our dear mobile phones. First, playing with phones is harmful to our eyes. Second, we have so much school-work to do. Third, we'd better talk to each other face to face instead of chatting on the phone. What's worse, if we pay much more attention to our phones, dangerous things may happen to us.

In a word, the mobile phone plays an important part in our life, but we ought to use it correctly. Then we can have a better life.

【解析】這是一篇命題作文，以“How to use mobile phones properly”為題，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，第一人稱進(jìn)行表達(dá)。短文共分三段，第一句用一個(gè)短語With the development of society and science指出人們使用智能機(jī)的社會(huì)原因；第二句指出一種社會(huì)現(xiàn)象：mobile phones are widely used in our daily life。第三句話鋒一轉(zhuǎn)，how should we use mobile phones properly?揭示本文主題：How to use mobile phones properly？第二段是全文的重點(diǎn)，講述過度使用手機(jī)的危害。然后由first, second, what's more引出幾個(gè)方面的理由。要點(diǎn)明晰，條理分明。作者使用了spend some time doing sth, 動(dòng)名詞作主語，不定式作定語，if引出的條件狀語從句等等。具體生動(dòng)。短文最后一段號(hào)召人們正確使用手機(jī)，揭示主題we ought to use it correctly. Then we can have a better life.