Question

【題目】書面表達

隨著電子商務(wù)的發(fā)展，網(wǎng)上購物已經(jīng)越來越流行了，請根據(jù)下列提示詞，描述一下你第一次網(wǎng)購的經(jīng)歷。

要點與參考詞匯：want to buy a book, excited, pay money, wait for a long time, broken , sad, call the seller, change, at last , learn be honest, in online shopping

寫作要求：1. 內(nèi)容必須包括上面提示的要點。（盡可能多地應(yīng)有以上包括要點的詞匯，并可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮）

2. 文章結(jié)構(gòu)合理，條理清晰，語句連貫、行文流暢。

3. 詞數(shù)：80左右。短文開頭已給出，你可以選擇使用，或者自己從頭開始寫。（如選用開頭，請接著從下一行開始寫，開頭不計入總詞數(shù)。如不選用開頭，請空兩行，自己從頭開始寫）

It is really convenient to shop online because of the development of the e-business. I still remember the experience that I shopped on taobao for the first time.

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Answer 1

【答案】

It is really convenient to shop online because of the development of the e-business. I still remember the experience that I shopped on taobao for the first time.

I could find the book that I wanted in the bookstore. So I decided to buy a book online. I felt a little excited because it was my first time. After paying money online, I waited for a long time.

When the book arrived, it was broken. I felt really angry and called the seller. The seller agreed to change another book for me. I learn that being honest is important in online shopping. At last I got the new book and felt happy. (84 words)

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。要求介紹。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等。

寫作亮點：這篇文章語言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，詞匯及時態(tài)運用正確，能夠把提示的內(nèi)容敘述清楚，語句通順，意思連貫是一篇不錯的文章。