Question

【題目】【2016山東棗莊】書(shū)面表達(dá)

Please write a passage of basketball in about 90 words according to the following mind map.

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

James Naismith invented basketball. The first basketball game was played on December 21, 1981. Basketball became an Olympic event in Berlin in 1936. The NBA games are the most famous in the world and the CBA games are becoming more popular in China. There are two teams in a basketball game. Players on the same team must work together to get the ball into the other team’s basket. At the same time, they need to stop the competing team from getting the ball into their own basket. It is played by 100 million people in over 200 countries.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹籃球的發(fā)展史以及打籃球的方法和它受歡迎的情況。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般過(guò)去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱(chēng)為第三人稱(chēng)，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：The first basketball game was ...，There are...，Players on the same team must...，they need to ...，It is played by ...等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系.

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了籃球的發(fā)明，接下來(lái)介紹籃球的發(fā)展和打籃球的方法，最后介紹籃球的受歡迎情況。此處in the world,become more popular,at the same time,need to do sth, stop sb from doing sth等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。