Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)。

以The Earth is sick!為題完成小作文

The Earth is sick

The Earth was clean and beautiful．

Now some parts are

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Answer 1

【答案】TheEarthissick

ThereisairandwaterontheEarth.People,wildanimals,insectsandplantsliveontheEarth.Manyyearsago,theEarthwas cleanandbeautiful.Today,wehaveairpollution,waterpollutionandlandpollution.Peoplearecutti

ngdowntheforeststobuildfactoriesandhouses.Theymuststopcuttingdowntheforests.Peoplearekillinganimalstogetmeatandskins.Theymuststopkillinganimals.TheEarthisverysick.WemustsavetheEarth.

【解析】

這是一篇看圖作文，根據(jù)所給的題目和圖片寫作文，時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)，描寫了地球以前與現(xiàn)在的樣子，形成鮮明的對比，然后提出建議保護(hù)地球。通篇語句通順，中心明確，最后點(diǎn)明主題，與題目相呼應(yīng)，是一篇精彩的文章。