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As is known to all that millions of graduates crowded into the job market each year. But
because the financial crisis, the situation of the employment has become very serious.
Consider this, some people suggest graduates should have a lower career expectation, such
as working in the western area of China. I in favor of this idea. Firstly, compared with the
big cities, the competition is not as fierce there, but graduates can easy get a job. Secondly,
the lower position may offer graduate more space. All in all, going to the west maybe bring
more benefits. Devote yourself to the west, for it is both good for our personal development
and for our country at present.
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