短文改錯英語課上,老師要求同桌同學(xué)相互修改作文。假設(shè)以下小作文為你同桌所寫，請你對其進(jìn)行修改。文中共有10處錯誤,每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加,刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（^），并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞。

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

3．必須按答題要求做題，否則不給分。

On March 25th last spring, I, as well as my brothers, were leaving for Nanjin in order to go to Jack's concert. I very fond of Jack's songs so I couldn't wait to see him. After we arrived at the center of the water stadium, the large number of people were waiting there. We met a few exciting fans of Jack, smiling and holding picture of Jack. Finally, at 8 o'clock in the evening, Jack turned down slowly among the cheers of all fans. Dressing in a red coat, Jack sang many more beautiful songs.

Following his rhythm, I sang with music. Finally, the concert ended up with a famous song by Jack.

書面表達(dá)

假如你是學(xué)生會主席，請根據(jù)下面圖表，用英語寫一則關(guān)于春游的通知。

注意：

1.通知必須包括表內(nèi)所列內(nèi)容，可以適當(dāng)調(diào)整內(nèi)容的順序和增加細(xì)節(jié)，使其連貫、完整。

2.詞數(shù)：100左右。3.通知時間：3月20日

4.參考詞匯：植物園the botanical garden; 學(xué)生會the Students' Union

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A. where B. when C. that D. which

To save trouble, you may as well _______ the product online before you place an order.

A. predict B. polish C. promote D. preview

— I think you’d better write him a letter immediately.

— ______? He’ll come here the day after tomorrow.

A. Why bother B. So what C. Why not D. How come

Although the plan is not so perfect, they are strongly opposed ______ it.

A. to not conduct B. not to conduct

C. to not conducting D. not to conducting

Didn’t it occur to you ______ we could have solved the problem in an easier way?

A. that B. whether C. how D. why

I see no reason why they shouldn’t go on playing for another four or five years __ they are fit enough.

A. unless B. so that C. though D. providing that

Since Perry went abroad, his house has been neglected and weeds are _______ everywhere.

A. winding up B. springing up

C. lighting up D. rising up

Much as I would love ______ to the party yesterday, I didn’t because I had to prepare for the interview.

A. to go B. going

C. to have gone D. having gone