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增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

On Friday，our teacher told us that there would an English corner in front of our teaching building．I set about soon after the l ast class in the afternoon．

To my joy，the English corner had just been on for a few minute．I joined them on their talk．At first，I was afraid that my English was so poor and limit that I couldn’t follow them or make myself understanD． I was also afraid that anyone might la ugh at me．But a smiling face here or an encouraging nod there soon put me at ease．Though I speak to them only in simple English that day，I believe in future I will make a greater progress．

The Brown Bear

My wife Laura and I were on the beach，with three of our children，taking pictures of shore birds near our home in Alaska when we spotted a bear. The bear was thin and small，moving aimlessly.

Just a few minutes later，I heard my daughter shouting，“Dad！The bear is right behind us！” An aggressive bear will usually rush forward to frighten away its enemy but would suddenly stop at the last minute. This one was silent and its ears pinned back—the sign(跡象) of an animal that is going in for the kill. And it was a cold April day. The bear behaved abnormally，probably because of hunger.

I held my camera tripod(三腳架) in both hands to form a barrier as the bear rushed into me. Its huge head was level with my chest and shoulders，and the tripod stuck across its mouth. It bit down and I found myself supporting its weight. I knew I would not be able to hold it for long.

Even so，this was a fight I had to win：I was all that stood between the bear and my family，who would stand little chance of running faster than a brown bear.

The bear hit at the camera，cutting it off the tripod. I raised my left arm to protect my face；the beast held tightly on the tripod and pressed it into my side. My arm could not move，and I sensed that my bones were going to break.

Drawing back my free hand，I struck the bear as hard as I could for five or six times. The bear opened its mouth and I grasped its fur，trying to push it away. I was actually wrestling(扭打) with the bear at this point. Then，as suddenly as it had begun，the fight ended. The bear moved back towards the forest，before returning for another attack—the first time I felt panic.

Apparently satisfied that we caused no further threat，the bear moved off，destroying a fence as it went. My arm was injured，but the outcome for us could hardly have been better. I’m proud that my family remained clear?headed when panic could have led to a very different outcome.

1.The brown bear approached the family in order to .

A． catch shore birds

B． start an attack

C． protect the children

D． set up a barrier for itself

2.The bear finally went away after it .

A． felt safe

B． got injured

C． found some food

D． took away the camera

3.The writer and his family survived mainly due to their .

A． pride

B． patience

C． calmness

D． cautiousness

Happiness is a journey We always convince ourselves that life will be better after we get married, have a baby, than another. Then we are frustrated that the kids aren't old enough and we'll be more content when they are. After that we're frustrated that we have teenagers to deal with1.

We always tell ourselves that our life will be complete when our spouse gets his or her act together. when we get a nice car, and are able to go on a nice vocation when we retire.2. If not now, when? Our life will always be filled with challenges. It's best to admit this to ourselves and decide to be happy anyway.

One of my favorite quotes comes from Alfred Souza. He said."for a long time it had seemed to me that life was about to begin, real life. But there was always some obstacle in the way, something to be gotten through first, some unfinished business, time still to be served, a debt to be paid.3._ At last it dawned on me that these obstacles were my life." This perspective has helped me to see that there is no way to happiness. Happiness is the way. So treasure every moment that you have.

4.So stop waiting until you finish school, until you go back to school; until you get married, until you get divorced; until you have kids; until you retire; until you get a new car or home; until spring; until you are born again to decide that there is no better time than right now to be happy….

5.So, work like you don't need money, love like you've never been hurt, And dance like no one's watching.

A． Looking back, we may think it’s really an extraordinary journey.

B． The truth is, there's no better time than right now.

C． And remember that time waits for no one.

D． we will certainly be happy when they are out of that stage.

E．The more you have a sense of belonging, the happier you will be.

F．Happiness is a journey, not a destination.

G．Then life would begin.

假定你是李華，你的外國朋友史密斯夫婦（Mr. and Mrs.Smith）昨天給你發(fā)郵件說他們這周六要去參加一個重要的聚會，想請你照顧一下他們10歲的兒子湯姆，請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)回信。

主要內(nèi)容如下：

1.表示愿意幫忙；

2.告訴他們你周六的計(jì)劃；

3.祝史密斯夫婦玩得愉快。

請根據(jù)以上信息組織一篇文章。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.開頭已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Mr. and Mrs.Smith,

_______________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

Beaches are not only great for lying on and doing water sports, and in fact one of the best ways of enjoying them is a classic beach walk．Here at iWantSun．Co．Uk, we’ve been searching the globe to find you the world’s best and most glorious beach walks, and here’s our pick of the top．

The Footpath of the Gods, Amalfi Coast, Italy

The name says it all really and you truly do feel up there to walking along this wonderful mountain coastal path, which offers some of the most striking views on the planet．The path begins at town of Bomerano to charming Positano along the UNESCO World Heritage area of the Amalfi Coast．The whole walk will take you approximately four and a half hours to complete and pass over narrow rocky paths, past sheer cliffs and shining blue bays．

Sydney’s Great Coastal Walk, Australia

Sydney’s coastline is one of the most beautiful and diverse in the worlD． Here you have national parks, historic sites, steep cliffs, sparkling beaches and quiet bays all in one place．Sydney’s Great Walk runs all the way from Barrenjoey in the north to Royal National Park in the south and takes an incredible seven days to complete．However, if you’re not up to doing the full walk, then there are many different parts of the walk that you can do right in the city．Walking from the city’s famous Bondi Beach to the sweeping curve of Bronte Beach takes just an hour, which takes in some top scenery．

Great Ocean Walk, Australia

The Great Ocean Walk stretches 104 km along Victoria’s famous Great Ocean Road, located on the southern coast of Australia, from the resort town Apollo Bay to the magnificent Twelve Apostles．The Twelve Apostles are the area’s famous stone landmarks which stand out like giants from the seA． The walk passes through a range of landscapes and sights, from national parks, famous surfing spots and deserted beaches, to wild coastlines, cascading waterfalls, lush forests, historic lighthouses and ghostly shipwrecks．Day walks and shorter three-hour walks such as the Wreck Beach Walk or the Lighthouse Cemetery and Lookout Walk can also be enjoyeD．

So next time when you’re looking for a beach holiday don’t just think about the resorts and the sand, but consider a more active sun holiday, discovering some of the best beaches in the worlD．

1.The author intends to tell us ____________．

A． the wonderful beaches in the world

B． the world’s best places for beach walks

C． the beautiful beaches in Australia

D． the ideal tourism resort for health

2.When you arrive at the Amalfi Coast _______________．

A． you will be fascinated by the scenery

B． you must be fed up with the footpath

C． you can start walking from Positano

D． you may be trapped in narrow rocky paths

3.What is special about Sydney’s Great Coastal Walk?

A． It starts from Royal National Park in the south．

B． It takes about more than five hours to complete．

C． It really has the longest coastline in the worlD．

D． It provides visitors a variety of great landscapes．

4.According to the fourth paragraph we can know that __________________．

A． the Twelve Apostles exists below the surface of the sea

B． most visitors can finish the 104 km walk in three hours

C． Apollo Bay is at the end of the Great Ocean Walk

D． the Wreck Beach Walk can also give visitors pleasure

1.緊急的adj．u________________

2.居民 n．i________________

3.巨大的 adj．v________________

4.羽毛 n．f________________

5.戰(zhàn)役，活動 n．c__________________

6.廢料，垃圾 n．g_________________

7.發(fā)生 v．o_____________

8.原則，準(zhǔn)則 n．p________________

9.辭職 v．r_________________

10.民用的，國內(nèi)的 adj．c_______________

11.容納（乘客等）v．a(chǎn)_________________

12.(歷史的) 遺跡，遺物 n．r______________

13.幸運(yùn)地，幸虧 adv．f________________

14.預(yù)告，預(yù)報(bào) vt．f________________

15.遷移，搬遷 vt．r______________

16.有意義，有道理 _____ _____

17.突然遭遇（風(fēng)暴等）_____ _____ _____

18.瀏覽 _____ _____

19.依據(jù) _____ _____ _____

20.努力 _____ _____

閱讀下列短文，從每題所給的四個選項(xiàng)（A、B、C和D）中，選出最佳選項(xiàng)。

Chinese female scientist Tu Youyou won the 2015 Nobel Prize in medicine on October 5 for her discoveries concerning a novel treatment against Malaria（瘧疾）． This is the first Nobel Prize given to a Chinese scientist for work carried out within ChinA．

Tu shared the prize with Irish-born William Campbell and Satoshi Omura of Japan, who were honored for their revolutionary anti-roundworm treatment． 84-year-old Tu is awarded this prize for her contribution to cutting the death rate of malaria, reducing patients’ suffering and promoting mankind’s health． Although she received several medical awards in the past, the 2015 Nobel Prize is definitely the most privilege reward that recognizes Tu’s dedication and perseverance in discovering artemisinin（青蒿素）, the key drug that battles malaria-friendly parasites（寄生蟲）．

However, her route to the honor has been anything but traditional． She won the Nobel Prize for medicine, but she doesn’t have a medical degree or a Phd． In China, she is even being called the “three-noes” winner: no medical degree, no doctorate, and she’s never worked overseas． No wonder her success has stirred China’s national pride and helped promote confidence of native Chinese scientists．

The fact that Tu has none of these three backgrounds reminds us that science should be more accessible to all． One shall be able to become a scientist no matter what kind of background he or she comes from, as long as one dives into scientific research． There have been discussions on people who really love science but are never able to achieve much during their whole life． Their contributions can never be ignored． They work so hard to prove the wrong way so that the future researchers will be closer to the right one．

As the first Chinese mainland Nobel Prize Winner of natural science award, Tu’s record-breaking winning also serves as a reminder to those who are too eager for instant success． Science is never about instant success． Tu spent decades on scientific research before its value is officially acknowledged． There is no way to measure how much one devotes to science and compare it with how much reward he or she may get．

1.It can be concluded from the text that __________．

A． Tu worked home and abroad to conduct her research

B． Tu got the Nobel Prize for her anti-roundworm treatment

C． The Nobel Prize is the first award to recognize her work

D． Her discovery of artemisinin has helped to cut Malaria death rate

2. The author seems to agree that a person who is more likely to become a scientist is the one with__________．

A． a sense of national pride

B． relevant academic knowledge

C． a desire to achieve success

D． enthusiasm for scientific research

3.In writing the passage, the author intends to ___________．

A． inform readers of the news and make comments

B． discourage the pursuit of instant success in science

C． remind readers of the principles of scientific research

D． praise the award winner and encourage scientific research

根據(jù)短文內(nèi)容，從短文后的選項(xiàng)中選出能填入空白處的最佳選項(xiàng)。選項(xiàng)中有兩項(xiàng)為多余選項(xiàng)。

Have you ever studied a subject or brainstormed an idea, only to find yourself with pages of information, but no clear view of how it fits together? This is where Mind Mapping can help you．

Mind Mapping is a useful technique that helps you learn more effectively, improves the way that you record information, and supports and enhances creative problem solving． By using Mind Maps, you can quickly identify and understand the structure of a subject． You can see the way that pieces of information fit together, as well as recording the raw facts contained in normal notes．1., as they help your mind recall and review．

Popularized by Tony Buzan, Mind Maps abandon the list format of conventional note taking．They do this in favor of a two-dimensional structure． A good Mind Map shows the 'shape' of the subject, the relative importance of individual points, and the way in which facts relate to one another．2.

1. Write the title of the subject you're exploring in the center of the page, and draw a circle around it．

2. As you come across major subdivisions or subheadings of the topic (or important facts that relate to the subject) draw lines out from this circle． Label these lines with these subdivisions or subheadings．

3. As you "burrow" into (挖掘) the subject and uncover another level of information (further subheadings, or individual facts) belonging to the subheadings, draw these as lines linked to the subheading lines．

4.3.．

5. As you come across new information, link it in to the Mind Map appropriately．4.．Sub-topics and facts will branch off these, like branches and twigs from the trunk of a tree． You don't need to worry about the structure you produce, as this will evolve of its own accorD．

5. ．If you do any form of research or note taking, try experimenting with Mind Maps． You will find them surprisingly effective!

A． To draw a Mind Map, follow these steps:

B． Mind Mapping is an extremely effective method of taking notes．

C． They help you to associate ideas and make connections that you might not otherwise make．

D． A complete Mind Map may have main topic lines radiating in all directions from the center．

E．Then, for individual facts or ideas, draw lines out from the appropriate heading line and label them．

F．More than this, Mind Maps help you remember information

G．When created using colors and images or drawings, a Mind Map can even resemble a work of art!

Once there was a poor farmer and his farm belonged to(屬于) a rich man． One day he brought a basket of apples to the rich man’s house． On the doorsteps, he met two monkeys dressed like children． They jumped onto the basket to eat the apples and threw some on the grounD． The farmer politely took off his hat and asked the monkeys to get off． They obeyed(服從) and the farmer went into the house． He asked to see the rich man． A servant took him to the room where the rich man was sitting．

"I have brought you the basket of apples you asked for," he saiD．

"But why have you brought a half-empty basket?" the rich man askeD．

"I met your children outside, and they stole(偷) some of the apples．"

1.Why did the farmer bring apples to the rich man? Because

A． he was poor

B． he liked the rich man

C． his farm belonged to the rich man

D． the rich man’s children liked apples

2.What did the monkeys do when the farmer was on the doorsteps?

A． They jumped and jumpe

B． They playeD．

C． They ran away．

D． They ate some of the apples．

3.The monkeys left the basket because

A． they had thrown apples on the ground

B． the farmer had politely asked them to get off

C． they were afraid of the hat

D． the farmer wa s angry wit h them

4.How did the rich man feel when he saw the basket? He felt 。

A． pleased

B． unhappy

C． excited

D． moved

閱讀下面材料，在空白處填入適當(dāng)?shù)膬?nèi)容（不多于3個單詞）或括號內(nèi)單詞的正確形式

Computer began as a calculating machine in France in 1642 Computer developed very _1.(slow) and it took nearly two hundred years _2._ it was built as an analytical machine, _3._followed instructions from cards with holes． In 1936 Alan Turing wrote a book _4.__(describe) how computers could be made to work as a "universal machine" _5.__(solve) any mathematical problem．

By the 1940s computer _6._(grow) as large as a room ． As time went__7. it has grown smaller, and with artificial_8._(intelligent), it is getting cleverer and cleverer, quicker and_9._(quick)． In the early 1960s, computers could be connected by a network． So people were able to share their information _10._others through the World Wide WeB．