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20．Winning style
    Failure is unavoidable on one's way to success and should not be afraid of．If one wants to succeed，he should have a plan and stick to it．
    Experiencing failure is unavoidable on your journey to success．Every defeat is only a small part of victory．You'll find that the number of times you succeed is in direct proportion（成比例） to the number of times you fail and keep trying．
Failure is nothing but education，and nothing but the first step to something better．You can't be afraid to lose．It isn't enough to just want something．You're going to need a plan to get the things that you want．
The problem is learning how to bridge the gap which exists between where you are now and the goals that you want to reach．With a definite step-by-step plan you cannot fail because each step will carry you along to the next step like a track．All you need is the plan，the road map and the courage to move on to your destination．
Knowing where you're going is all you need to get there．You can't get lost on a straight road．
[寫作內(nèi)容]
1．以約30個詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容．
2．以約120個詞談?wù)勀銓?失敗與成功"的看法，內(nèi)容包括：
（1）你是如何看待失敗與成功之間的關(guān)系；
（2）列舉你失敗的一次經(jīng)歷及當(dāng)時你的感受；
（3）你當(dāng)時是如何走出失敗的．
[寫作要求]
1．作文中可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子．
2．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱．
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Answer 1

分析 本文主題為：表達(dá)對"失敗與成功"的看法
寫作要點(diǎn)為：（1）你是如何看待失敗與成功之間的關(guān)系；
（2）列舉你失敗的一次經(jīng)歷及當(dāng)時你的感受；
（3）你當(dāng)時是如何走出失敗的．

解答 On one's way to success people are sure to experience failure，which can be regarded as education．People should only know what their plan is and stick to it until they succeed．
When it comes to the relationship between failure and success，I think failure is a key factor on my road to success．Since it is inevitable，we should not be afraid of it as it enables us to accumulate experience and finally brings us to our goal．
It suddenly occurs to me that I have experienced failure before．Ten months ago，I took part in an English writing contest after I had made full preparations for it．However，the theme of the writing was so unfamiliar to me that my mind went blank the instant I read it．I failed to write it and ranked last finally，feeling extremely depressed and frustrated．
    Later，my best friend asked me to face my failure bravely，saying that every defeat is only a small part of victory．At that time，I came to realize that failure is nothing but the first step to something better．I finally walked out of the shadow of failure and moved on to my success．

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