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9．假設你是學生李華，得知好朋友William在學習中感到壓力很大，學習效果甚微，請你按照以下要點給他寫一封電子郵件，幫助他放松身心，提高學習效率．
1．快樂學習   2．課外活動    3．多交流
注意：1．詞數100左右，開頭和結尾已為你寫好（不記入總詞數），但不得抄入答題卡內．
2．可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear William，
Recently，I have heard that you feel stressed about study．I have a good mind to offer you some advice on how to study effectively．
First of all，learn in a relaxing way．This will remove our pressure，making study an easy job．Another way to keep up our spirits is to take part in sports．Not only does exercise build up the body，but also it provides us time to relax and fresh our mind，making us memorize things faster and longer．（高分句型二）Music，too，is another effective means of refreshing and helping us concentrate better．
Last but not least，we should exchange ideas with our classmates．Through the communication we can find support，which will encourage us to overcome difficulties in our study．（高分句型三）
I hope these can benefit you．
Yours
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 假設你是學生李華，得知好朋友William在學習中感到壓力很大，學習效果甚微，請你給他寫一封電子郵件，幫助他放松身心，提高學習效率．內容要點：1．快樂學習，保持愉快的心情；2．積極參加體育活動，聽聽歌曲音樂；3．多與同學交流，互相鼓勵．
寫作時不要逐句翻譯，可適當增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫同時要把所提示的點寫全，語句通順，同時要注意準確運用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系．根據句意適當使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩．注意：1．詞數100左右，開頭和結尾已經為你寫好；2．可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
【亮點說明】Recently，I have heard that you feel stressed about study．句中使用賓語從句；
Here is some advice on how to study effectively．疑問詞加動詞不定式在句中作介詞賓語；
Not only does exercise build up the body，but also it provides us time to relax and fresh our mind，making us memorize things faster and longer．Not only---，but also---引導部分倒裝，句中并且運用了現在分詞作結果狀語；
Through the communication we can find support，which will encourage us to overcome difficulties in our study．非限制性定語從句出現在句中．

解答 Dear William，
     Recently，I have heard that you feel stressed about study．Here is some advice on how to study effectively．（高分句型一）
     First of all，learn in a relaxing way．This will remove our pressure，making study an easy job．Another way to keep up our spirits is to take part in sports．Not only does exercise build up the body，but also it provides us time to relax and fresh our mind，making us memorize things faster and longer．（高分句型二）Music，too，is another effective means of refreshing and helping us concentrate better．
     Last but not least，we should exchange ideas with our classmates．Through the communication we can find support，which will encourage us to overcome difficulties in our study．（高分句型三）
     I hope these can benefit you．
                                                                                                                                                                                                             Best wishes!
                                                                                                                                                                                                              Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．