Question

【題目】假如你是李華，作為高一新生，你要在主題班會上做自我介紹，內(nèi)容需要包括以下要點：

1.姓名、年齡；

2.家庭情況；

3.業(yè)余愛好；

4.想和同學(xué)們交朋友。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.開頭已經(jīng)給出，不記入總詞數(shù)。

Hello, everyone! It’s a great honor to be here to introduce myself to you.

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Answer 1

【答案】Hello, everyone! It’s a great honor to be here to introduce myself to you.

My name is Li Hua. I’m sixteen years old. There are three people in my family, and just like most of you, I’m the only child, which is very common in Chinese families. My father works in a hospital and my mother is a teacher in a senior school. We love each other dearly.

Besides my courses, I have various hobbies, such as reading, drawing and swimming. In my spare time, I have also collected a lot of stamps, which are very precious now because we seldom post a letter nowadays.

In a word, I’m pleased to be one of you and I sincerely hope that we can become good friends in our daily life.

【解析】試題分析：本文是一篇自我介紹的文章。作為高一新生，你要在主題班會上做自我介紹，內(nèi)容需要包括以下要點：姓名、年齡；家庭情況；業(yè)余愛好；想和同學(xué)們交朋友。根據(jù)所給提綱，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來。寫作時注意時態(tài)、語態(tài)的合理運用，根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【亮點說明】

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