Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)學(xué)生會主席李華，請你代表學(xué)校給外教Chris寫一封郵件，邀請他來參加你校學(xué)生的成人禮，并向他簡要介紹活動情況，包括以下內(nèi)容：

1.時間、地點(diǎn)；

2.活動內(nèi)容；

3.活動意義。

注意：1.詞數(shù)不少于50。

2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

提示詞：成人禮Coming-of-Age ceremony

Dear Chris,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Chris,

I’m president of the Student Union. On behalf of our school, I’m writing to invite you to take part in our Coming-of-Age ceremony. It will be held in our school auditorium from 8 a.m. to 10 a.m. this Friday.

First of all, students will present flowers to their parents and teachers to show their gratitude. After that, our headmaster and one of the parents will deliver speeches to express their congratulations and best wishes. At the end of the ceremony, the students will make an oath that they will shoulder their responsibilities from then on.

I really hope you will come and witness this meaningful and unforgettable moment.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】這是一篇提綱類作文。這類文章可分三段來寫，第一段先自我介紹，表明邀請；第二段講述活動舉行的時間、地點(diǎn)、內(nèi)容、意義等；第三段期待對方的回復(fù)。

同學(xué)們在寫這篇文章時，要注意以下幾點(diǎn)：

一、通篇要以一般將來時時為主。

二、要點(diǎn)要齊全。但是不要對要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行簡單的羅列。可以使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞，使上下文行文流暢，銜接自然。

三、注意語氣。寫信要注意人稱，先介紹自己，加上敬辭。

可以采用簡單句和復(fù)合句結(jié)合的方法，內(nèi)容要豐滿。

【范文亮點(diǎn)】

1、范文采取了短語（First of all，After that, At the end of the ceremony,）使文章顯得層次分明。

2、文章采用了On behalf of our school, take part in our Coming-of-Age ceremony等高級短語。