Question

【題目】短文改錯

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。作文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏子符號（∧）并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Facebook managed to put its vast treasure trove(寶藏) of user data to good use before Friday’s tragic terror attacks in Paris. The social network customized its safety check feature let users know whether their friends and loved ones in Paris are safe.

Users in the area are being alerted(通知) by Facebook’s mobile apps, asked them whether they are safe, and offering to check on any of their friends. The app has also been sending out alerts to anyone who has friends in Paris, and Facebook’s website lets anyone check on the status and whereabouts(去向) of their friends as well as.

Most people have seen Facebook’s safety check for the first time today, and the company actually lanched it in respond to the Nepal earthquake earlier this year. At the time, Facebook CEO Mark Zuckerberg wrote: “When disasters happen, people need to know their loved ones are safe. It’s moments like this when being able to connect really matters.”

Facebook wasn’t the only tech company to direct reach out to its users in Paris after the terror attacks. AirBnB（空中食宿） sent its customers in Paris a email advising them staying in place and follow the directions from local authorities, and Uber（優(yōu)步） used its app to advise users “not to move if absolutely necessary.”

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】before→after

【2】feature 后加 to

【3】asked→askiing

【4】as well as 去掉后面一個as

【5】and →but

【6】respond →response

【7】when→that

【8】direct →directly

【9】a→an

【10】if→unless

【解析】

試題分析：

【1】before→after 句意：上周五巴黎恐襲悲劇發(fā)生后，社交媒體“臉書”設(shè)法讓其巨量的用戶數(shù)據(jù)發(fā)揮了極大作用。根據(jù)句意故before→after。

【2】feature 后加 to 考察不定式，句意：臉書啟用了定制版“安全簽到”功能為了讓用戶借此知道在巴黎的親友是否安全。不定式表目的。故feature 后加 to。

【3】asked→askiing 考察現(xiàn)在分詞做伴隨的狀語，句意：臉書用戶的移動端程序會彈出消息，詢問他們是否安全，還可以幫他們確認(rèn)他們的朋友是否也安全。故asked→askiing。

【4】as well as 去掉后面一個as考察固定結(jié)構(gòu)，句意：臉書網(wǎng)站也向所有人開放查詢他們的朋友的狀況和去向。as well 也。故去掉后面一個as。

【5】and →but 考察連詞，句意：大多數(shù)人可能都是今天才第一次發(fā)現(xiàn)臉書有安全簽到功能。但其實早在今年尼泊爾地震時，臉書就推出了該功能。從句意可看出，前后句之間轉(zhuǎn)折，故and →but。

【6】respond →response 考查固定結(jié)構(gòu)in response to 響應(yīng)，回答。

【7】when→that 考察強(qiáng)調(diào)句型 句意：這種時候，保持聯(lián)系真的很重要，本句強(qiáng)調(diào)moments like this。

【8】direct →directly 考察副詞，句意：不單單是臉書，還有其他科技公司也在恐襲發(fā)生后，第一時間想要與它們的巴黎用戶取得聯(lián)系。此句副詞修飾動詞短語reach out to.﹍。

【9】a→an 考察冠詞 an e-mail 一封郵件，

【10】if→unless 考察連詞，句意：除非絕對必要，否則不要亂跑。根據(jù)句意可知if→unless。