Question

【題目】書面表達：
最近你發(fā)現我們學校很多學生的飲食存在很嚴重的問題，他們不吃早餐或其他正餐，而是選擇一些垃圾食品。請根據以下提示寫一篇英語短文。
1）闡述問題；
2）分析原因（學生喜歡吃垃圾食品、餐廳飯菜種類少等);
3）提出兩個以上解決辦法。注意詞數120左右（開頭已給出，但不計入總詞數）。
參考詞匯：餐廳 canteen

Answer 1

【答案】Recently many students in our school aren't having breakfast or eating other meals throughout the day. Instead they are choosing to eat some junk food. This is really a problem.

One reason for this problem is that many students love eating junk food, but don't know what effects it can bring to their health. Another reason is that there are only a few types of food in the canteen for students to choose from.

To solve this problem, first, we can hold lectures or speech contests on healthy eating, which will make students realize the harmfulness of junk food. Second, the canteen should offer a wide variety of food. Last, we'd better call on parents to help their children from good eating habits. I think these ways will help students keep a healthy diet.

【解析】考查半開放類作文。本文要求考生寫一篇英語短文，敘述學校中學生存在的飲食問題。文章使用第三人稱和一般現在時為主的時態(tài)。要點：1.闡述問題：很多學生的飲食存在很嚴重的問題，他們不吃早餐或其他正餐，而是選擇一些垃圾食品。2.分析原因：學生喜歡吃垃圾食品、餐廳飯菜種類少等；3.解決方法：舉辦關于健康飲食的講座，讓學生意識到垃圾食品的危害。同時要求父母親協助孩子養(yǎng)成良好的飲食習慣。建議文章分為三部分，各要點自成一段。同時使用考生熟悉的句式和結構，讓文章更加流暢自然。