Question

16．第一節(jié)：短文改錯(cuò)
    Time and tide wait no man．My mother is becoming a middle-age woman quietly．She had been busy running after us all the years．My father is very busy every day outside．But the heavy burden falls on my mother's shoulder．Because my school is far from my home，I have to go to school by the train and my mother sees me off at the station every time．I often choose a seat where is close to the window，so I can see her．However，I always can't help run tears from my eyes．All the buildings and peopleoutside the window disappear．I wave gentle to my mother and I look at her till the view of her back disappears．Up to now，even if he is busy，she still does it as usual．The view of my mother's back will never change in my heart．

Answer 1

分析 短文主要描寫了作者的母親為了家庭奉獻(xiàn)了自己，在作者離開家去學(xué)校的時(shí)候，母親的背影深深地留在作者的心里．

解答 Time and tide wait∧no man．My mother is becoming a middle-age woman
                          for                                                middle-aged
quietly．She had been busy running after us all the years．My father is very busy every
                    has
day outside．But the heavy burden falls on my mother's shoulder．Because my school is
                     So                                                        shoulders
far from my home，I have to go to school by the train and my mother sees me off at the
                                
station every time．I often choose a seat where is close to the window，so I can see her．
                                                        which/that
However，I always can't help runtears from my eyes．All the buildings and people
                                        running
outside the window disappear．I wave gentle to my mother and I look at her till the 
                                                         gently
view of her back disappears．Up to now，even if he is busy，she still does it as usual．
                                                                        she
The view of my mother's back will never change in my heart．
1．wait后加for，考查固定搭配，wait是不及物動(dòng)詞，表示"等待某人"使用短語wait for sb．．
2．middle-age改為middle-aged，考查形容詞，此處使用形容詞"中年的"middle-aged來修飾名詞woman．
3．had改為has，考查句子時(shí)態(tài)，短文時(shí)態(tài)使用的是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，此處指母親從以前到現(xiàn)在一直照顧著我們，因此使用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)．
4．But改為So，考查連詞，此處是因果關(guān)系，而不是轉(zhuǎn)折，因此使用連詞so．
5．shoulder改為shoulders，考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)，人是有兩個(gè)肩膀的，因此使用名詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式．
6．the去掉，考查固定搭配，使用某種交通工具使用by+交通工具，因此the去掉．
7．where改為which/that，考查定語從句引導(dǎo)詞，此處考查定語從句的引導(dǎo)詞，先行詞seat，引導(dǎo)詞使用that或which．
8．run改為running，考查固定搭配，表示"情不自禁做某事"，使用can't help doing sth，因此run改為running．
9．gentle改為gently，考查副詞的用法，此處應(yīng)使用副詞修飾動(dòng)詞wave，因此形容詞gentle改為gently．
10．he改為she，考查人稱代詞，此處指母親，應(yīng)使用人稱代詞she．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)要具備兩個(gè)基礎(chǔ)，一是懂得分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)，二是知道充當(dāng)各個(gè)句子成分的詞類或詞性．并且注意人稱代詞，從句的引導(dǎo)詞，名詞單復(fù)數(shù)，和全文時(shí)態(tài)的理解，對(duì)于一些固定搭配，平時(shí)的學(xué)習(xí)中要多注意積累．