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【題目】假定你是李華，在得知東京奧運(yùn)會(huì)推遲至明年的消息后，需要將之前在Airbnb上預(yù)訂的房間取消，并希望退回訂金，請(qǐng)給你的房東Abe先生寫(xiě)一封郵件，要點(diǎn)如下:

1. 寫(xiě)信目的；

2. 表達(dá)歉意,解釋原因；

3. 期待明年造訪東京。

注意:1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫。

參考詞匯:東京奧運(yùn)會(huì)the Tokyo Olympics 訂金deposit

Dear Mr. Abe,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr. Abe,

My name is Li Hua. I regret to tell you that I have to cancel my previous reservation of your apartment on Airbnb. Meanwhile, I hope I can get all my deposit back since it is subject to unforeseen circumstances.

I feel sorry for the cancelation and regret any inconvenience it may cause. I am longing to stay at your apartment, but it was not until recently that I was informed that the 2020 Tokyo Olympic Games was rescheduled/postponed due to the outbreak of the coronavirus. Worse still, my flights booked earlier this year have been cancelled in view of the worsening situation.

Hopefully a new date for the Olympics will soon be confirmed when the virus is contained. Stay healthy and keep social distancing! I'm looking forward to visiting Tokyo and your place in 2021!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫(xiě)一封郵件，與房東取消預(yù)定的房間，退回定金并致歉。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)。

結(jié)構(gòu)：分為三段，每段圍繞要求展開(kāi)來(lái)寫(xiě)。

要求：

1.寫(xiě)信目的。(cancel previous reservation & get deposit back)

2.表達(dá)歉意，解釋原因。(The 2020 Tokyo Olympic Games was rescheduled; flights have been cancelled)

3. 期待明年造訪。(looking forward to visiting Tokyo in 2021)

第二步: 列提綱 （重點(diǎn)詞組）

Regret to tell; cancel the reservation; get deposit back; feel sorry for; inconvenience; reschedule; flight; cancel; contain; look forward to

第三步：連詞成句

1. I regret to tell you that I have to cancel my previous reservation of your apartment on Airbnb.

2. I hope I can get all my deposit back.

3. I feel sorry for the cancelation and regret any inconvenience it may cause.

4. The 2020 Tokyo Olympic Games was rescheduled/postponed.

5. My flights booked earlier this year have been cancelled.

6. I'm looking forward to visiting Tokyo

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, Not only…but (also)…, Including, Meanwhile

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對(duì)比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, But, Although+clause(從句), In spite of+n/doing, On the one hand…,on the other hand…, Some…,while others…

4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, Thus, Therefore, As a result, Be due to

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡，書(shū)寫(xiě)一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步：潤(rùn)色修改