【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改 10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Dear Wang Mei,

I’m sorry to hear about your problem. Don’t be too concerning about it. Now I’d like to give you some advice. Firstly, you may have the heart-to-heart talk with your roommates. Perhaps they will realize their mistakes or correct them. Secondly, if you find hard to have a good talk with them, you may write a letter about them. Lastly, if these ways don’t work, you’d better to report it to your teacher, whom will help solve the problem. Good communication is the key to deal with the relationship with others. Maybe someday you should become good friends. I hope my advice will be of greatly help to you.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】1. concerning----concerned

2. the-----a

3. or----and

4. find后加it

5. about---to

6. 去掉第7句第1個(gè)to

7. whom---who

8. deal---dealing

9. should---will

10. greatly----great

【解析】本文是一篇書(shū)信形式的寫(xiě)作。主要是針對(duì)朋友在關(guān)于寢室之間的人際相處中出現(xiàn)的問(wèn)題，提出的幾點(diǎn)建議。

“Don’t be too concerning about it”，be concerned about關(guān)心、掛念，為固定詞組，故將concerning改為concerned。

“you may have the heart-to-heart talk with your roommates”，have a heart-to-heart talk with,和…談心，為固定句式，故將the改為a。

“Perhaps they will realize their mistakes or correct them”，分析句子，realize their mistakes認(rèn)識(shí)錯(cuò)誤，和 correct them改正錯(cuò)誤，是一種邏輯上的并列關(guān)系，故將or改為and。

“if you find hard to have a good talk with them”，分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)，find是動(dòng)詞，hard是形容詞，二者之間缺少賓語(yǔ)，故添加it,作形式賓語(yǔ)。

“you may write a letter about them”，write letters to sb.，給某人寫(xiě)信，故將about改為to。

“ you’d better to report it to your teacher”，had better do sth. 最好做某事，故將to刪掉。

“ whom will help solve the problem”，分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)，從句will help solve the problem缺少主語(yǔ)成分，應(yīng)用who作為連接詞。故將whom改為who。

“ Good communication is the key to deal with the relationship with others”，the key to doing sth.，to是介詞，故將deal改為dealing。

“Maybe someday you should become good friends”，根據(jù)someday未來(lái)的某一天，表示將來(lái)時(shí)，故將should改為will。

“I hope my advice will be of greatly help to you”，be of+抽象名詞=抽象名詞的形容詞形式，名詞前可以用great、much等修飾，故將greatly改為great。

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