Question

6．假設你是某高中學生李華，進入髙中之后，你覺得學習英語的方式與初中有很大不同．你給自己初中的英語老師李老師寫了一封信，講述自己學習英語的情況．請你根據下面的提示寫出此信．
1．開始學習髙中英語時，覺得比初中所學的要難得多，幾乎喪失信心．
2．后來認識到英語的重要性．
3．每天努力學習英語．
4．向老師和同學請教更好的學習英語的方法．
5．現在英語取得了很大的進步，對英語越來越感興趣．
注意：
1.100詞左右；
2．行文連貫，不要逐字逐句羅列要點，注意分段．
Dear Mr Li．
I'm glad lo tell you that I have made great progress in my English study since Ibecame a senior high student．（高分句型一）
When I started senior English in the beginning，I found it much more difficult than ever before and I almost lost heart．（高分句型二）Later，I gradually realized the importance of English，so I worked hard every day，such as reciting and reading as often as possible．I also asked my teachers and classmates for better ways of learning English．It is their help and your encouragement thathelp me improve my English．（高分句型三）And now I'm getting more interested in it．Thank you so much for your great help．
Wish you all the best．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據提示信息假設你是某高中學生李華，進入髙中之后，你覺得學習英語的方式與初中有很大不同．你給自己初中的英語老師李老師寫了一封信，講述自己學習英語的情況，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點包括：開始學習髙中英語時，覺得比初中所學的要難得多，幾乎喪失信心．后來認識到英語的重要性．每天努力學習英語．向老師和同學請教更好的學習英語的方法．現在英語取得了很大的進步，對英語越來越感興趣．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象．要依據提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫．3、根據要表達的內容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：make great progress 取得進步； in the beginning在開始；lost heart灰心喪氣；as often as possible盡可能多；get interested in 對…感興趣；
I'm glad lo tell you that I have made great progress in my English study since I became a senior high student．（高分句型一）
When I started senior English in the beginning，I found it much more difficult than ever before and I almost lost heart．（高分句型二）
It is their help and your encouragement that help me improve my English．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Mr Li．
      I'm glad lo tell you that I have made great progress in my English study since I became a senior high student．（高分句型一）
      When I started senior English in the beginning，I found it much more difficult than ever before and I almost lost heart．（高分句型二）Later，I gradually realized the importance of English，so I worked hard every day，such as reciting and reading as often as possible．I also asked my teachers and classmates for better ways of learning English．It is their help and your encouragement that help me improve my English．（高分句型三）And now I'm getting more interested in it．Thank you so much for your great help．
       Wish you all the best．
                                                                                                            Yours，
                                                                                                            Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．