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10．假定你是李華，你校將接待一批來自美國的高中生到你校學(xué)習(xí)漢語，目前學(xué)校正在為他們征尋為期兩周的接待家庭．請用英語給學(xué)校寫一封信提出申請，說明你的理由和條件．
內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：
1．基本情況（姓名、性別、年齡、性格等）；
2．英語水平；3．家庭情況；4．相關(guān)經(jīng)歷； 5．其他…
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭語和結(jié)束語已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
參考詞匯：host family 接待家庭
Dear Sir/Madam，
I'm Li Hua，an 18-year-old girl student in Class One，Grade Three．I'm open-minded，easy-going and enthusiastic．I think my English is good enough to communicate with foreigners and I like to make friends．（高分句型一）I live in a beautiful apartment and luckily，and my parents are glad to have a foreign student to stay with us．（高分句型二）We have an extra room for guests．Besides，we have a private car．Most importantly，we just had a homestay American student last year．
If you accept my application to be a host family，I promise to make the foreign student feel at home and we can visit some local places of interest in our free time．
Looking forward to your early reply．
Yours faithfully，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假定你是李華，你校將接待一批來自美國的高中生到你校學(xué)習(xí)漢語，目前學(xué)校正在為他們征尋為期兩周的接待家庭．請用英語給學(xué)校寫一封信提出申請，說明你的理由和條件，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點(diǎn)包括：基本情況（姓名、性別、年齡、性格等）；英語水平；家庭情況；相關(guān)經(jīng)歷； 其他…2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：communicate with 與…溝通；stay with sb和某人待在一起；Besides另外；Most importantly更重要的是； feel at home感到輕松自在；Look forward to 盼望；
I think my English is good enough to communicate with foreigners and I like to make friends．（高分句型一）
I live in a beautiful apartment and luckily，and my parents are glad to have a foreign student to stay with us．（高分句型二）
If you accept my application to be a host family，I promise to make the foreign student feel at home and we can visit some local places of interest in our free time．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Sir/Madam，
      I'm Li Hua，an 18-year-old girl student in Class One，Grade Three．I'm open-minded，easy-going and enthusiastic．I think my English is good enough to communicate with foreigners and I like to make friends．（高分句型一）I live in a beautiful apartment and luckily，and my parents are glad to have a foreign student to stay with us．（高分句型二）We have an extra room for guests．Besides，we have a private car．Most importantly，we just had a homestay American student last year．
       If you accept my application to be a host family，I promise to make the foreign student feel at home and we can visit some local places of interest in our free time．（高分句型三）    Looking forward to your early reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                          Yours faithfully，
                                                                                                                                                                                                   Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．