【題目】書面表達(dá)

下列表格為某市2005年與2015年人們度假方式的情況比較,請(qǐng)按表格內(nèi)容寫一篇120詞左右的短文,并對(duì)度假方式變化原因加以簡要評(píng)析。

年度

2005

2015

原因

境外旅游

11%

22%

收入增加

海邊度假

38%

31%

海水污染

爬山野營

11%

34%

回歸自然

注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右。

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。

3. 開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

The way people spend their holidays changed a lot from 2005 to 2015.

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【答案】One possible version

The way people spend their holidays changed a lot from 2005 to 2015.

The table shows that a greater number of people spent their holidays traveling abroad in 2015. The rate of 2015 (22%) doubled that of 2005 (11%). We are sure that the number will increase because with their incomes rising, more people can afford the journeys abroad.

At the same time, the seaside attracted a lot of people. However, the rate slightly dropped from 38% in 2005 to 31% in 2015, the reason for which lies in the fact that sea water is being polluted. The polluted seaside is likely to drive more visitors away.

The year 2015 saw a sharp increase in the number of people who went climbing and camping. The rate in 2015 (34%) was more than three times that in 2005 (11%). The reason is that more and more people are eager to get close to nature.

【解析】

試題分析:本文屬于圖表類寫作。這是一篇圖表作文,本文的關(guān)鍵之一就要注意百分?jǐn)?shù)的表達(dá)法。寫作時(shí)不要僅僅對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯,而是要添加些內(nèi)容,使文章看起來更充實(shí),要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。需要注意緊扣文章主題,給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括,缺一不可。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯關(guān)系,一定要契合給出的開頭,不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。

亮點(diǎn)說明:范文中高級(jí)句式的運(yùn)用很到位,如定語從句The reason for which lies in the fact that sea water is being polluted.表語從句The reason is that more and more people are eager to get close to nature.倍數(shù)表達(dá):The rate in 2015 (34%) was more than three times that in 2005 (11%).在寫作時(shí),運(yùn)用正確的高級(jí)句式可以給文章增色很多。

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