Question

4．假設你是李華，你期中考試英語成績不理想，打算今后用功學習．請根據(jù)以下要點，發(fā)送一份Email給你的筆友Jenny，談談你今后的英語學習計劃．
要點：
（1）成績不好的原因（至少三點）．
（2）今后英語學習的打算：（1）請教老師同學；（2）提高聽課效率；（3）及時完成作業(yè)；（4）…
注意：（1）信的內(nèi)容應包括所有要點，可適當發(fā)揮或增加細節(jié)；
（2）詞數(shù)120左右（信的格式及開頭已寫好，不記入總詞數(shù)）．
Dear Jenny
I'm sorry to tell you that I did poorly in English MidTerm Examination．Here are the reasons．A lack of hard work at English is the first point．Besides，the wrong belief in English learning is what led to failure．I have held a point that to learn English is to remember English words and phrases．What's most terrible is that I spend little time in comprehension reading．To improve English，I have made a new learning plan，hoping to make progress in English．From now on，I will turn to my English teacher and classmates for help if I come across some problems．At the same time，I will listen attentively in class and take notes in time when necessary．In addition，I will finish the assignments after timely revision every day．Above all，I will adopt correct learning strategies and work harder than before．
What do you think of my plan？
Your Faithfully
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇關于考試失利的作文．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱，用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)分析成績不好的原因；用一般將來時表達今后英語學習的打算，文章也主要包括這兩部分．
高分句型：
1．Besides，the wrong belief in English learning is what led to failure．句子里the wrong belief in English learning 是主語；what led to failure是表語從句，表示"導致失敗的原因"．
此外對英語學習錯誤的觀念是導致失敗的原因．
2．To improve English，I have made a new learning plan，hoping to make progress in English．句子里To improve English是動詞不定式做目的狀語；hoping to make progress in English是伴隨狀語，和主語I之間是主動關系．
為了提高英語成績，我制定了幾個學習計劃，希望能夠取得進步．

解答 Dear Jenny，
I'm sorry to tell you that I did poorly in English Mid-Term Examination．Here are the reasons．A lack of hard work at English is the first point．Besides，the wrong belief in English learning is what led to failure．【高分句型二】I have held a point that to learn English is to remember English words and phrases．What's most terrible is that I spend little time in comprehension reading．（分析成績不好的原因）
 To improve English，I have made a new learning plan，hoping to make progress in English．【高分句型二】From now on，I will turn to my English teacher and classmates for help if I come across some problems．At the same time，I will listen attentively in class and take notes in time when necessary．In addition，I will finish the assignments after timely revision every day．Above all，I will adopt correct learning strategies and work harder than before．（今后英語學習的打算）
What do you think of my plan？I am looking forward your letter．
                                                                                                                                 Your Faithfully
                                                                                                                                       LiHua

點評 考查提綱類作文．
提綱類作文一般給出的要點比較多，這就要求在寫作時不能有遺漏，無論是漢語還是英文的提示，都要在作文里體現(xiàn)出來，考生對此一定要重視．