Question

10．文中共有試10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處．沒處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在其下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．毎處錯誤及其修改均限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分．
Phil was a traveling salesman and he enjoyed drink alcohol very much．One day，he went to a strange town and spend the evening in a small restaurant．He'd drunk quite a lot and had just come out of  the restaurant when he saw another men in the middle of the road．The other man had been in the restaurant，either．And he had drunk even much than Phil had．He'd obviously seen something strangely in the sky because of he was pointing up．"Excuse me，"the man asked Phil，"Is that the sun and the moon？"Phil looked at it for a second and then said．"I'm afraid I can't help him．I'm also stranger here myself．"

Answer 1

分析 本文主要講述Phil去一個陌生的鎮(zhèn)上的小餐館里喝酒，在街上遇到了一個比他喝得更多的人，指著月亮問他"那是太陽還是月亮？"，他則回答：對不起，我不能幫你．

解答 Phil was a traveling salesman and he enjoyed drink alcohol very much．One day，he went to a strange town and spend the evening in a small restaurant．He'd drunk quite a lot and had just come out of  the restaurant when he saw another men in the middle of the road．The other man had been in the restaurant，either．And he had drunk even much than Phil had．He'd obviously seen something strangely in the sky because of he was pointing up．"Excuse me，"the man asked Phil，"Is that the sun and the moon？"Phil looked at it for a second and then said．"I'm afraid I can't help him．I'm also∧stranger here myself．"
詳解：
1．drink改為drinking 考查動名詞．enjoy后接動詞時要用動名詞形式．
2．spend改為spent 考查動詞時態(tài)．a(chǎn)nd是并列連詞，它前后連接兩個相同的語法成分，enjoyed和spent是并列謂語，都用一般過去時態(tài)．
3．men改為man 考查名詞．根據(jù)上下文，本文中只出現(xiàn)了兩個人，另一個要用單數(shù)形式．
4．either改為too 考查副詞．either意為"也"，用于否定句；too意為"也"，用于肯定句．此處是肯定句，用too．
5．much改為more 考查副詞比較．根據(jù)句中than，要用副詞比較級．
6．strnagely改為strange something是不定代詞，用形容詞作后置定語．副詞strnagely的形容詞是strange．
7．去掉of 考查詞語用法．because of意為""，是介詞短語，后接名詞或代詞作賓語；because意為"因為"，是連詞，后接句子．此處用連詞，因為后面接的是句子．
8．a(chǎn)nd改為or 考查連詞．根據(jù)句意：那是太陽還是月亮？表示兩者間的選擇，用連詞or．
9．him改為you 考查代詞．根據(jù)句意：對不起，我不能幫你．用代詞you．
10．加a 考查冠詞．stranger是可數(shù)名詞，單數(shù)形式前加不定冠詞a表示泛指．

點評 高考短文改錯題的形式有說明文，短文故事，書信等，具有很強的實用性．短文的內(nèi)容和語言都符合高中學(xué)生的實際，從表面上看類似一篇學(xué)生習(xí)作．首先，通讀全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的時態(tài)、人稱及行文邏輯，在通讀全文時把一些容易的錯誤先改好，再進行逐句改錯．其次，要進行逐個句子的改錯．這是要對文中的詞法、句法和語篇著重分析和特別注意．最后把改好的短文再閱讀一遍，檢查答案是否正確，感覺是否還有不妥之處，最終形成定稿．