Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Sometime in February, my teacher told us about the city speech contest, its topic was “People who have overcome difficulty in their lives.” I thought of my grandma would be my perfect topic. Then I carefully prepared for contest. A couple of weeks later, after the first round I was choosing to be one of the seven finalists! The final was held soon. I was the six to present the speech. How a relief when I finished it! After the last person finished, the judges made their final decisions and announced that I have won first prize. The audience were going wildly, clapping and cheering! I was extremely happy. It was such exciting a moment that I will always remember it.

Answer 1

【答案】1. its→whose

2. difficulty→difficulties

3. of去掉

4. contest前加the

5. choosing→ chosen

6. six→sixth

7. How→What

8. have→had

9. wildly→wild

10. such→so

【解析】在本文中作者講述了自己參加市演講比賽的情況，演講的話題是“People who have overcome difficulties in their lives”。作者認(rèn)真地準(zhǔn)備了這次演講比賽，最后榮獲了演講比賽一等獎，他永遠也不會忘記那一刻。
小題1. its topic was “People who have overcome difficulties in their lives”.分析結(jié)構(gòu)可知前后兩個句子中間沒連詞，city speech contest,是先行詞，在定語從句中作定語，所以可以把its改為whose成為定語從句，故答案是its 改為whose。
小題2. 人生當(dāng)中會遇到很多困難，名詞用復(fù)數(shù)形式，故difficulty改為difficulties。

小題3 I thought of my grandma would be my perfect topic. 介詞of后只跟名詞，代詞動名詞做賓語，不跟陳述句做賓語從句，think認(rèn)為，think of考慮，小題4. Then I carefully prepared for contest. 此處的contest是特指上文提到的演講比賽，故contest前面加定冠詞the。
小題5. I was choosing to be one of the seven finalists! 句子主語I 和謂語動詞之間是被動關(guān)系，應(yīng)該用被動語態(tài)，所以把choosing改為chosen。
小題6. I was the six to presenting the speech. 表示第幾個用序數(shù)詞the first、the second、the last等，故six改為sixth。
小題7.。How a relief when I finished it ! 感嘆句中對名詞進行感嘆需要用what，句型：what +（形容詞）名詞+主語+謂語，所以把How改為What。
小題8. had and announced that I have won first prize. 主句謂語動詞是一般過去時，賓語從句應(yīng)該用過去時的相應(yīng)形式，根據(jù)文章內(nèi)容可以判斷應(yīng)該用過去完成時，故have改為had。
小題9. The audience were going wildly clapping and cheering ! 動詞go在句中是系動詞，后面應(yīng)該跟形容詞做表語，故wildly改為wild。
小題10. It was such exciting a moment that I will always remember it. 在such/so…..that句型中，such 修飾名詞，so修飾形容詞和副詞，故such改為so。